who the fuck gives a shit what its call bitch it don't need a...

By Frater Synth







Pitch blackness,
Laying in the utter ecstasy of darkness,
Hidden in the shadows,
Of the dark angel of death,
Blinded by the look in her eyes,
keeping me from the light of the world,
I close my eyes ,
And what do i see,
Nothing,
But the temptational stare of the angel of death,
Waiting for me to give up,
Waiting for me to give her the consent to harvest my soul,
Waiting for me to take the final plunge,
And let my blood flow,
But guess what bitch my blood flows ,
Like a surging river of hatred,
Consuming the visions,
Of your deathly gaze,
Tearing through your astral flesh,
With the intensity of a whirlwind,
Rendering you shapeless,
Rendering you nameless,
Erasing you from existence,
For I am the one who breathed your life,
Gave you shape,
Gave you figure,
And the wings of an angel,
I brought you up from the depths,
And raised you up,
Unto the highest pedestal,
Of the inner sanctum of my soul,
I granted your every wish,
Until now,
You have overweighed the balance,
And soon your world will collapse,
Falling away from the grand towers of the inner sanctum,
And plunging back in the the ebon abyss,
From where I stole the energy needed to create you,
Your memory will remain,
Here among the stars,
But to every one you never were and never will be.



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Copyright 2006 Frater Synth
Published on Wednesday, October 4, 2006.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • denver nitze On Wednesday, February 27, 2008, denver nitze (251)By person wrote:

    knocked me on my ass. great write.

  • Dancing_Monkey On Friday, October 5, 2007, Dancing_Monkey (1228)By person wrote:

    powerfull poem .

  • Guillotine On Tuesday, December 12, 2006, Guillotine (168)By person wrote:

    I think you should both just get over yourselves. SD, next time you consider mouthing off to a community and brashly telling us you 'don't give a fuck', please reconsider.

  • Guillotine On Tuesday, December 12, 2006, Guillotine (168)By person wrote:

    If your going to be as abusive and aggravating towards our community I cannot see your place here or your fitting in.

  • Guillotine On Tuesday, December 12, 2006, Guillotine (168)By person wrote:

    If you "don't give a shit" about your spelling and people criticism, then maybe this is not the site for you. None of us are here for ego pats. Maybe you should try MySpace.

  • Frater Synth On Tuesday, December 12, 2006, Frater Synth (66)By person wrote:

    ... jus shut ur mouth cause i know ur only talkin hard cause u feel protected sittin behind that pc of urs

  • Frater Synth On Tuesday, December 12, 2006, Frater Synth (66)By person wrote:

    BTW SilentStalker jus cause ur royalty don't mean u can jus jump in between a convo going on between 2 ppl that has nothing 2 do with u so chilax and Instant_Insanity stop tryin to provoke a responce from me i'm not gonna lower myself to ur level u can

  • SilentStalker On Tuesday, December 12, 2006, SilentStalker (1047)By person wrote:

    ...well, I guess I found my prison bitch; I mean, come on, I'm just asking for a little peace around here; you two don't even make a cute couple, so stop fighting like it... Scholar

  • Guillotine On Tuesday, December 12, 2006, Guillotine (168)By person wrote:

    Stalker can do whatever he pleases. Arguments have no place here, he was merely pointing out the stupidity of your actions. That goes for both of you.

  • Frater Synth On Tuesday, December 12, 2006, Frater Synth (66)By person wrote:

    well Instant_Insanity i couldn't care less what u think about my writeing or what ne1 else thinks nd u obviously didn't read through it all the way cause u would kno i'm no player nd i'm not a wannabe i am what i am and thats all there is too it so fuck u

  • A former member wrote: Hey you fucking twat. You can suck my dick. ][ ][

  • SilentStalker On Tuesday, December 12, 2006, SilentStalker (1047)By person wrote:

    ...okay, children, take your ritalin, and go to bed an hour early... Scholar

  • A former member wrote: YOU FUCKING DICK!! Its guys like you that give guys a bad name, You fucking Wanna Be Player. Go Fuck Yourself!!!][ ][ BITCH! Scholar

  • Frater Synth On Sunday, October 8, 2006, Frater Synth (66)By person wrote:

    i don't have anger issues i'm just insane and i really don't give a shit what any of you think. the spelling may suck ass but who fuckin cares it still gets the point across so fuck you

  • SilentStalker On Sunday, November 19, 2006, SilentStalker (1047)By person wrote:

    ...that sounds to me like an anger issue right there; didn;'t even thank the kind people for their comments on it...shame, shame, no appreciation for criticism...bye now... Scholar

  • Kinkypoptart On Thursday, October 5, 2006, Kinkypoptart (555)By person wrote:

    I read this yesterday, but in no way could find words right that minute. Today I came back, and, although im still quite stunned by the magnificence of this piece this is amazing. :) Missed u Jayness. *kisses on the cheek* ~*~tart~*~

  • A former member wrote: *blinks as jaw drops* holy hell, the fact that this isn't whispered-this is SCREAMED-drives the message home even more powerfully. Sheesh, this is angry...nicely done. Very nicely done. ~*Beth*~

  • A former member wrote: Do we have a few anger issues.

  • A former member wrote: ][ ][

  • Dei On Wednesday, October 4, 2006, Dei (663)By person wrote:

    very in your face. Knocked the breath out of me.

  • A former member wrote: Whoah... this piece is so dark and bitter... there are a few typos but overall this is an exceptional write.

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