Comments by Frater Synth
- "Not really sure what to say other than , Fuck Yea that was awesome. makes me think about the song Call upon your Gods by Dark Lotus "
Posted by Frater Synth on "Outcast" by Legions Slave
- "I love the the way you sneak in the feelings of unwantedness and lonelyness. the only thing I didn't like was the formatting. sometimes line breaks are your best friend they force your readers stop briefly and as they do they dwell on the thoughts and imagery presented to them. you may not realize it but you can actually say a lot more just by adding a few line breaks. "
Posted by Frater Synth on "Dreams Of Death" by Legions Slave
- "I think you just proved Edgar Allan Poe wrong. he made a clear statement in his writing "The Poetic Principle" where he said "A vary short poem,while now and then producing a brilliant or vivid, never produces a profound or enduring, effect." But i will tell you right now This will stick deep within my Soul for years to come. Amazing job evoking the emotional response of the reader as you describe the soul crushing weight of depression. "
Posted by Frater Synth on "Nightmares" by Legions Slave
- "I like it ... other than the fact that you is all baby crazy again but, the imagery you used here was amazing "
Posted by Frater Synth on "Warring" by MoonLitShadowz
- "well yea anything can be good in moderation. Hate and Anger also fall into this spectrum of brain function. Fire here is just symbolic of all negativity that we may allow our lives to be consumed by and further lead down that path to self destruction. I know I didn't really get my full thoughts out here because I been so fucked in the head but what I really want to convey to people is we need to stop with the whole What If type of negative thinking and be a little less critical of ourselves because we our our own worst critics. "
Posted by Frater Synth on "Death in E minor (reflections on brainwave entrainment) " by Frater Synth
- "Exactly, Honestly I dont give a shit if this offends anyone religious preferences because I'm not trying to be disrespectful here all I am trying to do is shine some fucking light on this hypocrisy we all live in . We need to learn to embrace our imperfections if we are ever going to grow as a whole. "
Posted by Frater Synth on "Sinners Creed" by Frater Synth
- "Yea its kinda short but you picked up on my point. what I'm really trying to convey is basically don't let these negative thoughts consume you cause it could lead deeper down the rabbit hole. and as with fire there are some things that can be repaired but other things are lost forever in the flames. I probably could have done a better job with this but my mind isn't fully there today :) "
Posted by Frater Synth on "Death in E minor (reflections on brainwave entrainment) " by Frater Synth
- "Okay fine, I changed it from English to American to better get my point across. I know you Knew what I was referencing but the general audience who doesn't have insight to the personal experiences that sparked this piece would not fully grasp it. "
Posted by Frater Synth on "Serenity of Destruction" by Frater Synth
- "Thanks Kinki, It's been a rough few weeks dealing with all this crap, but your comment made me fell a bit better knowing that there is someone out there who understands "
Posted by Frater Synth on "Serenity of Destruction" by Frater Synth
- "Started out as synthetic darkness back in 05 then i had a few names in between lord syn a rose in hell being 2 of them and now I am Frater Synth "
Posted by Frater Synth on "The Rose" by Frater Synth
- "yea the second you hear something even close to that hit the ground yell incoming close your eyes hold your breath and hope to god its not coming for you "
Posted by Frater Synth on "Untitled" by Frater Synth
- "This is a new one. I likes it. you need to add all the others you wrote too tho. i know you think what you write isn't the best but trust me post it here on DP and people will open your eyes to just how good it is."
Posted by Frater Synth on "Beacon" by MoonLitShadowz
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