Freedom Isn't Free
By MoonLitShadowz
"Freedom isn't free"
We've all heard it once before
About the
soldiers who are willing
To make the ultimate sacrifice
Each has their own reason
To suit up and ship out
Put their
faith in one another
And the gun glued to their side
Whatever the reasons that
Make them leave behind
The loved
ones not forgotten
But swiftly put away
Quite clearly
they pay with
Blood and sweat and tears
But less remembered
are the missed
Birthdays, anniversaries, first steps
Thanks are all the public have
To give to them, who fight
So that we all may live
In a world where we are free
They go so we don't have to
And pay more than the rest
No
thanks will ever be enough
Will not bring back the dead
And we who are their support, the loved
Ones put aside, will
always remember
To be grateful for their sacrifices
While we
remember our own.
Author's Note:
It's a little rough..please let me know if you think there are spots to be worked onComments on "Freedom Isn't Free"
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On Thursday, November 24, 2011, TyrantAvDetForbannet
(273) wrote:
Freedom isnt free! of course!!
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On Sunday, November 14, 2010, Frater Synth
(66) wrote:
Nice one i think this is your best one yet love
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On Sunday, November 14, 2010, MoonLitShadowz
(18) wrote:
Aww thank you Love :)
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On Friday, November 12, 2010, Poetic-Realm
(253) wrote:
this one honestly got me out the door and on the bus towards a recruitment office, too bad im a wuss :]
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On Sunday, November 14, 2010, Frater Synth
(66) wrote:
hey if i can do it so can you Lol
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A former member wrote:
I really do understand the sentiment here, honestly, and it is the sentiment that I agree with. In light of that truth, I'll keep the rest of my opinion to myself. All that really matters anyway is the thought that seems to have spawned this well written and well thought out piece. Great job. I wouldn't change a thing. --Draven
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On Friday, November 12, 2010, Malcholm Dark
(806) wrote:
without their sacrifice, we would have nothing... go back to G. Washington and the blue coats... that's how close we came to being British... Nice piece, write on