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Flames of Goodbye
By Frater Synth
We never seem to have enough time
Our flames of passion rise
But the seas are rough
Our souls burn strong
With intensely passionate flames
But
wind and rain push us apart
As time goes on our fire grows
stronger
Ever increasing with heated passion
The temperate
rains of family fears can't extinguish us
These harsh military
winds of war
May be strong enough to push us apart
But this
goodbye won't last.
As our love grows
So do the
flames of our passion
Soon it will encircle the globe
And
that harsh tear filled goodbye
Will welcome a loving hello
The wind rain and seas will have failed
And we shall be
together forever
Lost in flames of passion as one.
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Copyright 2008 Frater Synth
Published on Tuesday, September 30, 2008.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Author's Note:
done tho it needs some editing still hope you like itComments on "Flames of Goodbye"
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On Tuesday, September 21, 2010, Scarrzz
(238)
wrote:
I like both the flow and the substance. A little bit of hope can help to carry us through very dark places.
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On Tuesday, September 30, 2008, estherbell
(53) wrote:
they do push us apart,indeed.
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On Tuesday, September 30, 2008, sixsixnine
(477) wrote:
I know the feeling. well said.
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