Flames of Goodbye

By Frater Synth

We never seem to have enough time
Our flames of passion rise
But the seas are rough

Our souls burn strong
With intensely passionate flames
But wind and rain push us apart

As time goes on our fire grows stronger
Ever increasing with heated passion
The temperate rains of family fears can't extinguish us

These harsh military winds of war
May be strong enough to push us apart
But this goodbye won't last.

As our love grows
So do the flames of our passion
Soon it will encircle the globe
And that harsh tear filled goodbye
Will welcome a loving hello

The wind rain and seas will have failed
And we shall be together forever
Lost in flames of passion as one.

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Published on Tuesday, September 30, 2008. Filed under: "Poetry"

Author's Note:

done tho it needs some editing still hope you like it

Comments on "Flames of Goodbye"

On Tuesday, September 21, 2010, Scarrzz (235) wrote:

I like both the flow and the substance. A little bit of hope can help to carry us through very dark places.
On Tuesday, September 30, 2008, estherbell (52) wrote:

they do push us apart,indeed.
On Tuesday, September 30, 2008, sixsixnine (476) wrote:

I know the feeling. well said.