Outcast

By Legions Slave

A goth steps off his bus
Prepared for a day that will change everyone's lives forever
The usual ridicule and hostile comments
He pulls a pistol from his messenger bag
He starts firing into the crowd of students
Proud to have them fearing and running from him
He kills five people
All jocks and bullies that mock him
He runs out of ammo
Angry he pulls out two knives from his messenger bag
The words pain and suffering engraved on him
And starts slashing people
In the end with 22 people dead
He walks out into the courtyard
A statue of god stands in the center
He stands in front of the statue
Submerges the knives into his chest
In his dying breath he recites the lords prayer
"Our father which art in heaven, Hallowed be thy name.
  Thy kingdom come.Thy will be done in earth, as it is in heaven.
  And forgive us our debts, as we forgive us our debtors.
  And lead us not into temptation, but deliver us from evil: For thine is the kingdom,
  and the power, and the glory for ever. Amen."

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Copyright 2011 Legions Slave
Published on Wednesday, August 31, 2011.     Filed under: "Ironic" and "Poetry"

Author's Note:

This scripture is found in Matthew 6:9-13
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  • Jesse Guzman On Sunday, November 20, 2011, Jesse Guzman (39)By person wrote:

    that's what they get 4 fucking with him. Awesome poem!

  • Frater Synth On Monday, September 26, 2011, Frater Synth (66)By person wrote:

    Not really sure what to say other than , Fuck Yea that was awesome. makes me think about the song Call upon your Gods by Dark Lotus

  • Devilish On Thursday, September 1, 2011, Devilish (2633)By person wrote:

    Wow! A prayer after the math... Seems logical, i mean of course we want to feel forgiven for the sins weve suffered and for suffering given.. I know the feeling.. Hello there.. Scholar

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