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Nightmares
By Legions Slave
Nightmares, monsters of my subconscious
Demons that lurk within my
mind
I submit to you
Take over my mind and soul
Destroy
me inside
Make me hollow
Slaughter my emotions
As I give
in to you
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Copyright 2011 Legions Slave
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A former member wrote:
nightmares, or night terrors?
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On Monday, September 26, 2011, Frater Synth
(66)
wrote:
I think you just proved Edgar Allan Poe wrong. he made a clear statement in his writing "The Poetic Principle" where he said "A vary short poem,while now and then producing a brilliant or vivid, never produces a profound or enduring, effect." But i will tell you right now This will stick deep within my Soul for years to come. Amazing job evoking the emotional response of the reader as you describe the soul crushing weight of depression.
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On Sunday, September 11, 2011, dwells
(4284) wrote:
Left me wanting more and feels like you might be holding back something, maybe? Or not, thanks.
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On Saturday, September 10, 2011, dwells
(4284) wrote:
Why? Bored or something? Develop further please, thanks.
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On Saturday, September 10, 2011, Legions Slave
(7) wrote:
What's wrong with it
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