Dreams Of Death
By Legions Slave
Breathless and Cold, I continue to run from the demon, a servant of death, pursuing me.I jolt to a stop, a cliff 5 feet in front of me. Deciding whether to jump and undoubtedly fall to my death or losing my soul to this unholy and dark specter. My choice was undoubtedly clear. I jump knowing I am going to smash into the ground, dark and rough looking. Falling, I close my eyes knowing that I will die. Just before I smash into the ground I wake up screaming and breaking out in a cold sweat. I lie back down unable to go back to the slumber that I was shocked from by my dream. I lie there staring at my ceiling, white and blank, thinking about my dreams wondering why no one will help me get these dark dreams out of my head. I come to an explanation, clear and concise, that no one will help me with these dark dreams because nobody cares about me. I am an outcast at school with no friends and my family despises me. I get up out of bed put on some warm clothes and slip on my sneakers. I walk out the door into the snow blanketed plain that is my yard. I walk down the driveway and off my family’s property into the cold frigid night to clear my head. I walk ten miles to a lake, one of many in the small cesspool of a town I am forced to call home. I walk carefully across the slick cement dock balancing myself on a pole on the side of the dock. All of a sudden I lose my balance slipping and busting my head on the hard icy edge of the dock. I fall through the thin layer of ice on the lake into the bone chilling water. I struggle then coming to a sudden realization I quit struggling and let myself drown in the icy lake.
Comments on "Dreams Of Death"
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A former member wrote:
Very cool story! I enjoyed the read, thank you :)
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On Monday, September 26, 2011, Frater Synth
(66) wrote:
I love the the way you sneak in the feelings of unwantedness and lonelyness. the only thing I didn't like was the formatting. sometimes line breaks are your best friend they force your readers stop briefly and as they do they dwell on the thoughts and imagery presented to them. you may not realize it but you can actually say a lot more just by adding a few line breaks.
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On Monday, September 19, 2011, SaintNHB
(41) wrote:
Have you been spying on my day dreams lately? So similar... I really dig this, it reminds me of myself a lot. I look forward to more.
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On Monday, September 19, 2011, sexxykiller14
(38) wrote:
wow. that was great, very emotional.