Epic Fail

By Kinkypoptart

Just when your life organizes itself,
just when the smile comes back to your face,
just when the sun seems to shine brighter than ever before,
a new cloud rolls in and
in seconds a tornado can destroy everything youve built

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Copyright 2009 Rochelle JohnnyJohn
Published on Sunday, October 25, 2009.     Filed under: "Depressed" and "Poetry"
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  • SulaMoon On Tuesday, January 11, 2011, SulaMoon (67)By person wrote:

    Too many times...I have had....epic failures. Thanks for putting it so eloquently.

  • A former member wrote: know this feeling all too well :/

  • A former member wrote: this is the kinda writing i always look forward to reading

  • Crush_With_Eyeliner On Monday, October 25, 2010, Crush_With_Eyeliner (47)By person wrote:

    the "weather" changes without warning. always. and yet we continue to build our lives, necessarily, in tornado areas...

  • Frater Synth On Monday, October 25, 2010, Frater Synth (66)By person wrote:

    Its nice to see your new works. but sad that you haven't posted new stuffs in a while

  • Riven Waker On Sunday, November 22, 2009, Riven Waker (317)By person wrote:

    the tornado seems like a metaphor for chaos - which can of course set reality on its ear - nicely written

  • A former member wrote: No fail is too epic! Chin up girl... you are better then that!

  • Qurious On Saturday, November 7, 2009, Qurious (40)By person wrote:

    i read this and thought "that'd make a great t-shirt". :) (that's a good thing!!!) well said.

  • blue On Tuesday, October 27, 2009, blue (1409)By person wrote:

    So true, and you don't even get the 'tornado warning', not even the tuesday 10 o'clock test-warning. well, its tues at 10 in chi-town. pop! ~b

  • darkdesires On Monday, October 26, 2009, darkdesires (139)By person wrote:

    Very true... but this is why guys created insurance... heh I know thats horrible especially coming from me, but always be prepared babe. gj. -dd

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