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Consummated
By Moodswing
(This is the first time I have tried this style...and I think it works
..ah what the hell..it feels good anyways...lol)
Spinning madly in this
Cyclonic confusion
Blinding delusion
Evokes
Carnal attraction
Electric reaction
Sparks
Consuming fire
My funeral pyre
Farewell to all that was
Once my soul
No more whole
Abandon
This empty shell
Nowhere to dwell
Vacate
Memory hall
Raze all
Surrender
To insanity's abyss
Such ludicrous bliss
Sink into the
Ebbing tide
Ultimate ride
...Consummated...
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Copyright 2003 Moodswing
Published on Wednesday, November 12, 2003.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Consummated"
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On Friday, June 20, 2008, Bluegirl
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wrote:
I am not usually much for rhyming poetry, but this was done quite well! :)
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On Sunday, August 13, 2006, Kinkypoptart
(555) wrote:
wow... amazing. this one's definitely a favorite. Great write ~*~tart~*~
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On Wednesday, November 12, 2003, Drea
(1388) wrote:
"Surrender To insanity's abyss Such ludicrous bliss" i love those lines.. this is wonderful. i really enjoyed this.. ~Drea~
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