Untitled

Hold my breath,

Close my eyes,

Hope that it passes by,

Whistling screams,

And a booming cry,

open my eyes,

to realize I am still alive.

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Published on Tuesday, October 26, 2010. Filed under: "Poetry"

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On Saturday, September 22, 2012, Dilated View (582) wrote:

This felt like ptsd personified. Terrifying in the sense that, to me, this piece hints that this moment could occur without warning in any setting. Thank you for sharing.
On Thursday, September 1, 2011, Corinthian (306) wrote:

like a self soothing lullaby .. very nice name comrade ..
On Wednesday, May 11, 2011, suicidalsecrecy (42) wrote:

Syn, this is.. so epic. I really enjoyed this.
On Tuesday, October 26, 2010, MoonLitShadowz (18) wrote:

I think this is your shortest one yet...however I quite like it...it has a...happy sorta ring to it even though I'm sure you are talking about rockets exploding and that has to be scary