Untitled

By Frater Synth



Hold my breath,

Close my eyes,

Hope that it passes by,

Whistling screams,

And a booming cry,

open my eyes,

to realize I am still alive.

 

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Copyright 2010 Frater Synth
Published on Tuesday, October 26, 2010.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Dilated View On Saturday, September 22, 2012, Dilated View (583)By person wrote:

    This felt like ptsd personified. Terrifying in the sense that, to me, this piece hints that this moment could occur without warning in any setting. Thank you for sharing.

  • Corinthian On Thursday, September 1, 2011, Corinthian (309)By person wrote:

    like a self soothing lullaby .. very nice name comrade ..

  • suicidalsecrecy On Wednesday, May 11, 2011, suicidalsecrecy (43)By person wrote:

    Syn, this is.. so epic. I really enjoyed this.

  • MoonLitShadowz On Tuesday, October 26, 2010, MoonLitShadowz (18)By person wrote:

    I think this is your shortest one yet...however I quite like it...it has a...happy sorta ring to it even though I'm sure you are talking about rockets exploding and that has to be scary

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