My last day in Iraq
By Dejected_Worth
I crawled to the banks of the Tigris cleansed
My sins swept down stream intermingled with my blood
And bullets and shame
And I am not a better man, just a better liar
And I'm sure somewhere there's someone
Who knows the weight of those waters
Who's tasted the salt of God's tears
Someone who too has gone under and came up
Unchanged yet different, somehow new
As if cleansed, yet stained from the dirty waters.
And I am not a better man, just a better liar
And deep down with every fiber
I wish I had drowned that day
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On Sunday, March 23, 2014, megaprime81
(743) wrote:
Wow. A lot of deep emotion flows forth from this write; impressively done. 10
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A former member wrote:
This poem stranggles me on my seat.
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On Friday, March 14, 2014, soul_versing
(882) wrote:
This is painfully deep, and for a split second, I felt guilty to be alive. Well deserving of a ten, as-well-as poem of the day.
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A former member wrote:
feeling this..
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On Friday, March 14, 2014, Frater Synth
(66) wrote:
It's not often that I read the POTD but yours caught my eye and reminded me of my time in the sandbox. I came back a better Liar as well.
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On Tuesday, January 28, 2014, Dejected_Worth
(84) wrote:
Thanks blues, means alot coming from you
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On Tuesday, January 28, 2014, Dejected_Worth
(84) wrote:
Appreciate it trop, youve always been one of my faves
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On Monday, December 2, 2013, FadedBlues
(2169) wrote:
...solid combat write. wishing those waters could wash it all away...
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On Monday, December 2, 2013, TropicalSnowstorm
(1703) wrote:
"Unchanged yet different, somehow new" - I feel you. I am really liking your style! Ciao, T/S