Blue Methadone Cosmo... An Artist On Stage...
By Bella Butchery
*sits on his stool, the harpsichord stares blankley… fingers like ivory
bones, audience in awe*
“….ahem…”
WHAT IS LOVE? This dream you spoke of?
Is it blood and chemicals?
Or endless carrousels
Trapped in abandoned hospitals?
“Ladies and gentlemen… prepare for decomposition”
“DEAR GOD!
WHERE IS MY DESPERATION
SPUN FROM LACK
OF SELF-RELIZATION!”
But the noose locks a truce
And love fits like a glove
Lest the darkness takes me
Ill keep screaming
“IM NOT SORRY
IM NOT SORRY!”
….In a glass my heart beats to the metronome….
…..smoke filled slow and filtered blue methadone….
So let the shooting start, because I cant help myself
And let the bullets rip us apart, leave me like everyone else
Ladies and gentlemen, is this wrong?
Feels so wrong…
I want to be a chauvinist of male proportions
But she dances so liquid
“I WANT TO RIP THOSE WINGS FROM THEIR SOCKETS!
I want her to inspire, I want her to bleed art…”
Is this wrong?
Felt so wrong…
Handheld syllables “this is spoken word with a blistered tongue”
*desires are racing, mind being lured
My face still slamming on the harpsichord*
broken lung resperator
help me to breath
i cant go on...
the show must go on....
Time escapes in a vacancy
The answer so magnanimous
And sparks a gentle complacency
OoOoOo Like crystallized thoughts in luminous bubbles OoOoOo
Let the bass take me away…
In a nod
Methadone in a haunt
Towards the crowd a gentle sway…
And the curtains lift… to the chorus riffs
As he sings songs about goodbye
And take a bow… if they allow
Until the cheers let you fly
On blue ocean spray away from this place...
Ill float in a liquor bottle towards the blaze…
“This is all I desire,
Drowned in blue methadone and
The harpsichord setting my heart on fire…”
Comments on "Blue Methadone Cosmo... An Artist On Stage..."
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On Thursday, June 7, 2007, purr_verse
(1052) wrote:
I'm very late to this impressive comment tower, and all the best compliments have been taken. So, sure, I'll echo them, but just to be contrary I'll also don my Pedant Hat, and point out that 'realization' is missing its 'A'. That's how good this is: I ca
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On Thursday, June 7, 2007, purr_verse
(1052) wrote:
I feel I can nitpick to that degree. Take a bow.
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On Thursday, June 7, 2007, Bella Butchery
(696) wrote:
*gasp* now i feel like i have been at a party for 3 months with my zipper down (how long this post has been up)... go ahead ink tounge gil, rip me up, i feel honored when you do it :):):)
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On Friday, April 6, 2007, Tonights Decision
(132) wrote:
this left me with a melancholic aftertaste of sugar coated venom.. with a agoraphobic scream stuck somwhere in me, your poetry is barbed, and i am left trying to pry out the traces of shards lingering in my mind..
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A former member wrote:
oh man i cant believe i hadnt read this one before! It is simply amazing....Delicate, harsh and intricate at the same time...Nice read man...And i agree with anna, i will never read anything like this again if its not from you im sure...Cheers..
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A former member wrote:
"On blue ocean spray away from this place...Ill float in a liquor bottle towards the blaze…" i love how your work is always so unique. i've never read anything like this. beautifully done.
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A former member wrote:
"In a glass my heart beats to the metronome" I am strangely reminded of Lenny Bruce-cum-Jim Morrison. "spoken word with a blistered tongue," This is. Bravo!
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On Friday, March 9, 2007, Rebel_not_Radical
(75) wrote:
~haha freaking fun...loved it...like a carnival show only not for kiddies...very cool write
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A former member wrote:
Wow this was brilliant. I'm gonna go now and read the rest of your works. Great write
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On Thursday, March 8, 2007, prettydisgrace
(93) wrote:
.. dont want to 'suck dp d***' as ive heard you say.. but brilliant!
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On Thursday, March 8, 2007, Bella Butchery
(696) wrote:
thank you :) at least someone gets the concept!
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On Friday, March 9, 2007, Tania
(192) wrote:
Whoop Whoop! *high fives jo*
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On Thursday, March 8, 2007, Lynaes
(854) wrote:
This.. has got to be one of my most favourite poems of yours. You've simply made a tear in the centre of my heart with these words.. "Is it blood and chemicals? Or endless carrousels Trapped in abandoned hospitals?"
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On Thursday, March 8, 2007, Lynaes
(854) wrote:
Jesus christ I'm breathless.. I agree Nuri.. En-fucking-core. You are astounding.
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On Wednesday, March 7, 2007, nur hidayah
(114) wrote:
I agree with every comment before me and can't seem to find anything to add to it! I am in shock, in awe and staggering from the impact of this candid, mad, clever piece. ENCORE.
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On Wednesday, March 7, 2007, urbanhumility
(1158) wrote:
surreal and fluid........distinct in its meaning and aftertaste.......well done..........urban
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On Wednesday, March 7, 2007, carlosjackal
(2788) wrote:
Bloomin' fantastic!! Every line of every stanza was like a hit from the poetry needle, a great rush of fabulous lines, original phrasing..like basslines pulled out of nowhere, brilliantly twisting the mind. Class A!
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A former member wrote:
'I want to be a chauvinist of male proportions'...this is funny sh*t, completely unique and brilliantly conceived.
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A former member wrote:
God where to begin! You are truly fucking amazing!!! Every time you write I'm just BLOWN AWAY. The title, god what a beautiful title. I'm just speechless. *applauding* -Marlena
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On Tuesday, March 6, 2007, unspeakable truth
(94) wrote:
beautiful write...electric
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On Tuesday, March 6, 2007, GraveFlower
(240) wrote:
your fuckin awesome...i could hear a beat, rhythm in my head.......thats crazy~*dani*~
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On Tuesday, March 6, 2007, Tania
(192) wrote:
This is art at its finest.. the way you have painted this piece as only you could do so.. unique. this is what inspires me..
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On Tuesday, March 6, 2007, lstdarkness
(26) wrote:
great as always.
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On Tuesday, March 6, 2007, Guillotine
(168) wrote:
"this is a spoken word with a blistered tongue" - great metaphors and expressions all through this piece. So many more great lines in this. Much respect.
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On Tuesday, March 6, 2007, Mylissa
(825) wrote:
the way you word, the way you flow, you are outrageous and even that is an understatement. simply stunning.
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On Tuesday, March 6, 2007, Imsosickxxx
(80) wrote:
Probably the best thing I have read on this site!!! This is purely remarkable...wow...
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On Tuesday, March 6, 2007, Vilification
(20) wrote:
very good, what else can i say
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On Tuesday, March 6, 2007, Sin
(1135) wrote:
Gorgeous! thats all i can say..simply magical..youre marvelous! ~kristy
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On Tuesday, March 6, 2007, Tania
(192) wrote:
God you dont cease to amaze me.. ill have to come back to this and leave a worthy comment. seriously.. ill have to read it over again.