c o r onary_calamitous.

By slow.burn.star


sever/heart

circulatory failure

cardiac
upset

includes loss of consciousness;
quick, shallow breathing leading rapidly to heaR.t ache ]
profound arterial hypo tension with non palpable pulses over major vessels;
and :: absent heart sounds.

Within several minutes
Electrical dysfunction
ventricular fibrillation
loss of hope
leading to vital organ injury.


""cardiogenic shock

symptoms include but are not limited to:
-chronic romantic letter writing and in most cases, poetry.
-chest pain behind the breastbone
pain that may be described as:
squeezing, deep aching,
tightness, or large pressure
a ton of bricks/
pain may be intense or subtle;
however,at times the victim may not feel any pain at all ~

shortness of breath that
occurs suddenly:..
& may be accompanied by overwhelming pain
sweating, nausea, delirium
light-headedness,
dizziness, or fainting
feelings of "impending doom"
or "abandonment"

worthless clear excretions from the tear ducts
are common.

oO.


~Note: heartbreak may be fatal ///


. Hemorrhage should be stopped .

kiss.airways.clear.
wipe.tears.

denial denial denialrepeat x3



only preventative measures
are

to a v oid love at all costs.




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Copyright 2004 slow.burn.star
Published on Friday, October 1, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Circe Avalon On Wednesday, December 5, 2007, Circe Avalon (115)By person wrote:

    That poem was so good, I read it to my friend, who is a med tech, and she was so amazed. We both agree, good work

  • thelostmessenger On Tuesday, November 20, 2007, thelostmessenger (112)By person wrote:

    beautiful. soo true. definately a masterpeice, although im sure someone below this has already said that =) *messenger

  • Bella Butchery On Thursday, April 12, 2007, Bella Butchery (724)By person wrote:

    ha, sex on a stick. that is what you are. i forgot what this was about, but my memory was just jogged around the block.

  • jaunty pill On Thursday, March 10, 2005, jaunty pill (47)By person wrote:

    I read this almost in the vein of my favorite poet Sapphire. It is magnificent and captures time in its movement and simple drive. Including enticing detail. Oddly wonderful.

  • Malice In Wonderland On Friday, October 8, 2004, Malice In Wonderland (987)By person wrote:

    Beautiful,heartwrenching...I love it...exquisite write Kya Scholar

  • BeautifulCalamity On Saturday, October 2, 2004, BeautifulCalamity (428)By person wrote:

    beautiful, and very delicate, every word had its own meaning.. the ending is very sad, but this to me seems like a tribute in a way to writing, the passion of it and romance.. in a bitter way, beautiful though, great write :D

  • purr_verse On Friday, October 1, 2004, purr_verse (1059)By person wrote:

    excellence! your distinctive style beautifully wrought here; wonderful write.

  • Zhee On Friday, October 1, 2004, Zhee (529)By person wrote:

    this felt like being in med school all over again... you really did a wonderful job with the concept... great write!

  • A former member wrote: This is one to be handled delicately...a true masterpiece...I really need to read all of your works.

  • Six-Out On Friday, October 1, 2004, Six-Out (1435)By person wrote:

    I agree with the doc...I bow before you. This ripped me in two. I know when it's you, I'll be amazed, thank you for not letting me down.

  • DoctorAsh On Friday, October 1, 2004, DoctorAsh (373)By person wrote:

    goddamn-it . misses star person, i bow before you - love is but a cup of spuck.

  • Angst Queen On Friday, October 1, 2004, Angst Queen (370)By person wrote:

    whoa...i'm gonna have to read through this one a few more times. i like

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