Angels and Devils
By thesuccubusreturns
I lie in a world of unending shadow
Without your touch my bones blacken
And my skin withers to nothingness.
I am a corpse
Killed by lost love
Why did you leave me?
Wasnt i your everything?
Isnt that what you told me?
As i lay holding you
Weeping into the night
Now the shadows are no longer happy
Lying in wait for my sacrifice of blood
They will drain me, stab me over and over
Till the pain slips away
And at last i can sleep
Are the shadows then to be feared
As they ease my pain and suffering
Maybe the shadows I fear are my angels
Protecting me from the pain u caused
Leting the blood purify
But that idea is terriefyining
For if that which i feared are angels
Who end my pain and woe
That which i love must be th devil
The cause of dispare
The cause of my demise
My life
My death
My love
Comments on "Angels and Devils"
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A former member wrote:
A darkly beautiful ride on the emotional tides of love lost
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A former member wrote:
"now the shadows are no longer happy, lying in wait for my sacrifice of blood" loved it. damn those shadows there always thirsty!great write...
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A former member wrote:
"For if that which i feared are angels/Who end my pain and woe/That which i love must be the devil" Never knowing what you're feeling, apart from being certain that it's one who's evil and untrustable. Excellent imagery. ~*Beth*~
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On Sunday, March 4, 2007, Guillotine
(168) wrote:
A lot of poignant and emotional responses well from this work, I can relate well to this. A sinister walk in the last few stanza's; post more and keep me reading.