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By Sealed Identity
7 lullabies orchestrate the beat of our desire.
we're playing out of tune.
I couldn't be anymore blunt, telling you I'm dying inside.
Cringe every time that empty feeling arises in my life.
Knowing I have no control for one more night.
waiting it out seemed logical at the time.
One more chance for redemption's all we ask.
I'll plead if I have to,
don't let me stand on the outside of this
broken glass,
There's no more time for looking on the outside anymore.
Mind if I step in and stay awhile?
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© 2006 Sealed Identity
Published on Sunday, October 29, 2006.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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A former member wrote:
I was drawn in, ready to flame because of the title. But I was so pleasantly surprised when I read this. Truly heartbreaking and I can relate. Fantastic piece of poetry. Absolutely remarkable.
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On Friday, March 30, 2007, thesuccubusreturns
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wrote:
the title caught my eye and i loved the poem. well done
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A former member wrote:
i like the title! your writing is so amazing very one i read i think is my fav, this one is no exception.
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On Sunday, January 28, 2007, Mari
(419) wrote:
and sure there's blankets in the closet, and probably some coffee in the pot. here's the remote control. make yourself at home =)
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On Sunday, January 28, 2007, Mari
(419) wrote:
hah i love the name i know you don't believe me but i always think that in my head, or something like it
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On Monday, January 15, 2007, Dei
(663) wrote:
This is fantastic. fast paced and intense.
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A former member wrote:
"Mind if I step in and stay awhile?" Good god...to be waiting because waiting seems best, even while you feel your heart shattering with every day that passes because you dont really want to wait at all..I know this. Excellent write. ~*Beth*~
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On Sunday, October 29, 2006, Dancing_Monkey
(1228) wrote:
The title holds no power over this write. The write makes me want to read more of yours, but the title *Raises a fist* Is just not right
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A former member wrote:
LOVE IT
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A former member wrote:
this was very cute !! :)
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