Rope (well sorta) unfinished?
By knowhereman
Doctor’s hands and eyes,
as I try to memorize,
every line and every curve.
A bowline here,
and a taught line there,
And look she fly’s in the air.
The lovely one is bound in rope.
And yet, she smiles, and laughs some more
The girl suspended from the floor
for me to torment even more.
Yet I find it hard to try,
as I am some what mesmerized.
The smell of hemp,
the feel of the rope,
I found my favorite type of drug
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© 2006 knowhereman
Comments on "Rope (well sorta) unfinished?"
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On Thursday, February 15, 2007, Sin
(1135) wrote:
softly erotic..leaves just enough for the imagination..lovely write ~kristy
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On Thursday, September 21, 2006, elisa
(1595) wrote:
i don't care what 'kind' of structure scaffold this piece...i love it......such a hypnotic concept.
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On Friday, September 22, 2006, knowhereman
(40) wrote:
Thanks.. I hoped some one would like it..
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On Sunday, September 17, 2006, Guillotine
(168) wrote:
The title is figurative? This isn't a real haiku. If you take that out, this would work fine.
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On Sunday, September 17, 2006, Bluegirl
(177) wrote:
I was thinking the same thing.
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On Sunday, September 17, 2006, knowhereman
(40) wrote:
done..
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On Sunday, September 17, 2006, knowhereman
(40) wrote:
Unfinished? not really sure, its done, and yet undone..