Rope (well sorta) unfinished?

By knowhereman

Doctor’s hands and eyes,
as I try to memorize,
every line and every curve.

A bowline here,
and a taught line there,
And look she fly’s in the air.

The lovely one is bound in rope.
And yet, she smiles, and laughs some more

The girl suspended from the floor
for me to torment even more.

Yet I find it hard to try,
as I am some what mesmerized.

The smell of hemp,
the feel of the rope,
I found my favorite type of drug

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© 2006 knowhereman
Published on Sunday, September 17, 2006.     Filed under: "Erotica" and "Poetry"
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  • Sin On Thursday, February 15, 2007, Sin (1168)By person wrote:

    softly erotic..leaves just enough for the imagination..lovely write ~kristy

  • elisa On Thursday, September 21, 2006, elisa (1616)By person wrote:

    i don't care what 'kind' of structure scaffold this piece...i love it......such a hypnotic concept.

  • knowhereman On Friday, September 22, 2006, knowhereman (40)By person wrote:

    Thanks.. I hoped some one would like it..

  • Guillotine On Sunday, September 17, 2006, Guillotine (172)By person wrote:

    The title is figurative? This isn't a real haiku. If you take that out, this would work fine.

  • Bluegirl On Sunday, September 17, 2006, Bluegirl (177)By person wrote:

    I was thinking the same thing.

  • knowhereman On Sunday, September 17, 2006, knowhereman (40)By person wrote:

    done..

  • knowhereman On Sunday, September 17, 2006, knowhereman (40)By person wrote:

    Unfinished? not really sure, its done, and yet undone..

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