Comments by Guillotine
- "a contained and morbidly beautiful dreampiece. It's nice having you posting again, you're brilliant at it and I hope you never stop. RW."
Posted by Guillotine on "intoxicated #87" by slow.burn.star
- "short... somehow slightly minimalist yet still a deathgrasp (however much an antithesis the term creates) upon emotion, love and longing of a human heart. A deserving dedication and memoir. I'm glad I read this."
Posted by Guillotine on "Here" by Err0r
- "It takes so much to swallow that emotion... whatever name we try to tag onto it. Desperation, pride, that completely crushing vice of emotion that hurts so much to pull yourself away with... I understand this way too well and was utterly wrenching. "
Posted by Guillotine on "Where the Weeds End" by johntaiyu
- "This was just so fucking amazing to me right now, one of the few things I've read lately which have been a blow to the heart. Thankyou."
Posted by Guillotine on "Wandering Stars" by NeroMatches
- "Some of the lines in here were great; "come with... the sun" and the last lines of the poem, however it sounded a little forcibly rhymed... good stuff though, just work on your rhythm."
Posted by Guillotine on "Oh Baby" by DeviantxSeraph
- "The brash edge of a persona/emotion/mindset; a coarse slap to the senses but yet well-worded and constructed. Kudos."
Posted by Guillotine on "Cidade de Deus" by Err0r
- "intriguing. I enjoy these writes immensely though, their slow-paced, insightful ponderings speak to me a lot more than the usual writes that seem to litter DP these days."
Posted by Guillotine on "Silver Dharma Moon" by johntaiyu
- "A siren-song to the sleeping, ignorant people in the world who would rather turn their heads than help others and face their own mortality. A nice write by you, Li, certainly compassionate."
Posted by Guillotine on "Fucked up Fantasy" by thesuccubusreturns
- "This was damn amazing and I feel priveleged to read it. I've fallen in love with works like this and this one was truly exceptional; here, an author, an artist, a soul-breather has scribbled out, painted and whispered a masterpiece."
Posted by Guillotine on "alanis song" by doll on the rag
- "loved the rhyme scheme in this, the structure, the dirty gritty feel to your words. This poemly so closely mirrored some of my own, yet far exceeded them with such elequent force."
Posted by Guillotine on "fuck-me-red film noir dreams." by verablue
- "particularly enjoyed the flawless use of punctuation, breathtaking content with a rythym that added whatever could be fitted into the sides of thid perfection."
Posted by Guillotine on "she spoke sapphire" by Six-Out
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