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Silver Dharma Moon
By johntaiyu
They don't like these zen poems
near as much
as the ones
about sex or drinking.
I get lots of kudos for those,
but these here
where open hearts and mist
is about all that happens
just don't seem
to get people's attention.
I should try a car chase
through fields of pompous grass
under the silver dharma moon
It'd never end.
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© 2007 johntaiyu
Published on Monday, June 25, 2007.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Silver Dharma Moon"
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A former member wrote:
kudos!
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On Saturday, June 30, 2007, Mari
(419)
wrote:
i like them. theyre my favorite =(
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A former member wrote:
maybe that kind of attention you just dont really need; false accolades reaped under pseudolines; write of you and all will fall as it should; i enjoyed this open honest piece....without strings or showyness..... .
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On Tuesday, June 26, 2007, MESUN
(230) wrote:
k, i think i see where you're coming from. no one stops to smell the roses anymore, we only look for computer graphics. we need diamonds when glitter should be enough. i almost blew this off, but i'm glad i didn't.
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On Tuesday, June 26, 2007, elisa
(1595) wrote:
'....I should try a car chase through fields of pompous grass...' ...or come on the peak of a voluminous mountain...... haha.... i completely understand where you're coming from... and i couldn't agree more... very well said.
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On Tuesday, June 26, 2007, Guillotine
(168) wrote:
intriguing. I enjoy these writes immensely though, their slow-paced, insightful ponderings speak to me a lot more than the usual writes that seem to litter DP these days.
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On Monday, June 25, 2007, capt_funguy
(777) wrote:
who are .."they" ?
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On Monday, June 25, 2007, Err0r
(358) wrote:
I know what you mean. I respect a person however who stays focused and doesn't die out for attention. Very Karmalicious write.
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