Oh Baby

By DeviantxSeraph

Oh baby,
this love,it drives me wild
like a cat toy, given to a child.

These kisses,the sweetest candy
come with me to where the mountains are sandy
and the stars shine brighter than the sun.

There's nothing for us here,
the world's just one big sphere.

Let's conquer it,
you and I,
together we'll share a lifetime.

I'll make the skies shine a brighter blue
Just so you can watch the branches ooze through.

just as long as I've got you
there's nothing we can't do.

Oh baby,
I'm looking for corny in my life
even the background music with the fife

Let's make a movie baby
Let's make history
Let's climb the clouds 'til we reach the sun
Lay right here beside me and close your eyes
Together we're going to paint the skies.

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© 2007 DeviantxSeraph
Published on Monday, August 20, 2007.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Guillotine On Tuesday, August 21, 2007, Guillotine (172)By person wrote:

    Some of the lines in here were great; "come with... the sun" and the last lines of the poem, however it sounded a little forcibly rhymed... good stuff though, just work on your rhythm.

  • DeviantxSeraph On Wednesday, August 22, 2007, DeviantxSeraph (17)By person wrote:

    It was actually written to be sort of silly. I was trying to get the point across at about 3am.xp

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