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Cidade de Deus
By Err0r
I'm no lover.
I'm a con.
a hustler with sincerity
for the innocent.
i've got
bitches.
cash.
connections.
deceit doesn't hurt,
unless you know about it.
'and you ain't neva' broke,
as long as someone owes you.'
i bet by now you're wondering why
and how
i can be this way...
it's simple
it's legal [shut up yes it is.]
and the only thing i've ever stolen
was your ex's heart.
after all,
life's just a game
[and i'm just monopolizing boardwalk...]
*Inspired by City Of God*
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© 2007 Err0r
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On Saturday, September 20, 2014, SickSanityJenn
(260)
wrote:
Very cool ink, well done
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On Monday, February 13, 2012, Dreaming in Stanzas
(303) wrote:
One of my favorite movies of all time and this poem was so fitting.
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On Friday, January 11, 2008, RequiemExMortis
(16) wrote:
Damn, and all this time, I thought I was broke... I know tons of people who owe me money! Maybe that's why I'm always so damn broke. Wow, what a vicious circle.
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On Friday, October 12, 2007, MESUN
(230) wrote:
damn that was heavy. (who says that?) any way, you're quite the role model for a self proclaimed deviant. hee hee hee, it's all good.
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A former member wrote:
I like the changed title. Brings it all full circle.
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A former member wrote:
Perfect! This was so fucking perfect
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A former member wrote:
Nice :) I liked the "deceit doesn't hurt unless you know about it" line
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On Sunday, July 22, 2007, Mylissa
(845) wrote:
Brilliant.. :}
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On Sunday, July 22, 2007, prettydisgrace
(96) wrote:
v.cool i like this mucho.
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A former member wrote:
Creative. I like how this DOESN'T fit into the mold of "How to Mkae Dark Poetry 101" I appreciate the uniqueness. ....-Samone
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On Sunday, July 22, 2007, Revisable Retina
(83) wrote:
hmm *thinks* hmmm I liked this, yeah I do.. "city of god" love the name as well ;)
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On Sunday, July 22, 2007, Swift
(35) wrote:
That last line was amazing, it was a perfect way to end. Bitches cash and connections, nice one =]. This piece is very heartfelt. ~Amber
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On Sunday, July 22, 2007, Mistress Shadow
(252) wrote:
I enjoyed the metaphors very much, they both fit wonderfully and were well described too. ~T
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A former member wrote:
Sheesh! Love it love it love it! That's all I can say, lol...I LOVE the last line...excellent, like a prick to the heart of whomever this was written for. Love it. ~*Beth*~
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On Sunday, July 22, 2007, Guillotine
(172) wrote:
The brash edge of a persona/emotion/mindset; a coarse slap to the senses but yet well-worded and constructed. Kudos.
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