Here
By Err0r
Here.
There are images of you.
Trapped behind the lids of my eyes.
It is Here;
That I choose to open up to you.
Here.
There is but you and I.
Between our hearts nothing more than silence.
It is Here;
That words are expendable and a simple glance could explain it all.
Here.
There are sunflowers that make up the sun.
Flourishing petals to warm our souls.
It is Here;
That the grass is absent of negativity and weeds.
Here.
There are dimmed lights and melancholy songs.
A mood set that I could greet your fingertips with mine.
It is Here;
That we touch palms to whisper lyrics against each other.
Here.
There is only fantasy.
Fantasy that I would sell my very spirit to create as a reality for you.
It is Here;
That I dream of you and I as
Us.
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© 2007 Err0r
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On Friday, October 12, 2007, MESUN
(230) wrote:
i don't read you enough like i use to. you never fail to impress me. i hope to talk to you again. your art lets me see inside you, and you are beautiful throughout. blessings to you my friend.
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On Sunday, September 16, 2007, Guillotine
(168) wrote:
short... somehow slightly minimalist yet still a deathgrasp (however much an antithesis the term creates) upon emotion, love and longing of a human heart. A deserving dedication and memoir. I'm glad I read this.
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On Saturday, September 15, 2007, elisa
(1595) wrote:
the poetic dialect between 'you' and 'I' ..... .... i get lost in the 'what if' of this reality..... nicely done.
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On Saturday, September 15, 2007, Swift
(35) wrote:
That was so sweet. The ending was beautiful; fantasy really is a great thing to make reality. Usually I don't like repeated words, but you pulled it off nicely. I was smiling as I got to the end of it. Hopefully this gets the reviews it deserves. ~Amber
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On Saturday, September 15, 2007, Aunty Depressant
(423) wrote:
How beautifully intimate. Your Here is a sweet haven.
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On Friday, September 14, 2007, Mistress Shadow
(249) wrote:
I loved your use of the word 'here'. I agree that there is a romantic feel to this piece, but the ending still leaves that realistic grip. ~T
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On Friday, September 14, 2007, The Crimson Queen
(917) wrote:
Your words simply drift me off into a world of beauty and hope, where dreams are the reality of life.. You've painted a beautiful picture across my eyes, and for that I thank you.
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On Thursday, September 13, 2007, Narcissa
(391) wrote:
What a beautiful place to be....
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A former member wrote:
This got me all dreamy and smiling :) I love your romantic view of life. I find myself dreaming of a Here and an Us too :)
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A former member wrote:
*sigh* with each stanza, your imagery grows more beautiful. I especially LOVE the way you ended this...you blow me away, darling. ~*Beth*~