Here

By Err0r

Here.
There are images of you.
Trapped behind the lids of my eyes.
It is Here;
That I choose to open up to you.

Here.
There is but you and I.
Between our hearts nothing more than silence.
It is Here;
That words are expendable and a simple glance could explain it all.

Here.
There are sunflowers that make up the sun.
Flourishing petals to warm our souls.
It is Here;
That the grass is absent of negativity and weeds.

Here.
There are dimmed lights and melancholy songs.
A mood set that I could greet your fingertips with mine.
It is Here;
That we touch palms to whisper lyrics against each other.

Here.
There is only fantasy.
Fantasy that I would sell my very spirit to create as a reality for you.
It is Here;
That I dream of you and I as
Us.

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© 2007 Err0r
Published on Thursday, September 13, 2007.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"
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  • MESUN On Friday, October 12, 2007, MESUN (230)By person wrote:

    i don't read you enough like i use to. you never fail to impress me. i hope to talk to you again. your art lets me see inside you, and you are beautiful throughout. blessings to you my friend.

  • Guillotine On Sunday, September 16, 2007, Guillotine (168)By person wrote:

    short... somehow slightly minimalist yet still a deathgrasp (however much an antithesis the term creates) upon emotion, love and longing of a human heart. A deserving dedication and memoir. I'm glad I read this.

  • elisa On Saturday, September 15, 2007, elisa (1595)By person wrote:

    the poetic dialect between 'you' and 'I' ..... .... i get lost in the 'what if' of this reality..... nicely done.

  • Swift On Saturday, September 15, 2007, Swift (35)By person wrote:

    That was so sweet. The ending was beautiful; fantasy really is a great thing to make reality. Usually I don't like repeated words, but you pulled it off nicely. I was smiling as I got to the end of it. Hopefully this gets the reviews it deserves. ~Amber

  • Aunty Depressant On Saturday, September 15, 2007, Aunty Depressant (423)By person wrote:

    How beautifully intimate. Your Here is a sweet haven.

  • Mistress Shadow On Friday, September 14, 2007, Mistress Shadow (249)By person wrote:

    I loved your use of the word 'here'. I agree that there is a romantic feel to this piece, but the ending still leaves that realistic grip. ~T

  • The Crimson Queen On Friday, September 14, 2007, The Crimson Queen (917)By person wrote:

    Your words simply drift me off into a world of beauty and hope, where dreams are the reality of life.. You've painted a beautiful picture across my eyes, and for that I thank you.

  • Narcissa On Thursday, September 13, 2007, Narcissa (391)By person wrote:

    What a beautiful place to be....

  • A former member wrote: This got me all dreamy and smiling :) I love your romantic view of life. I find myself dreaming of a Here and an Us too :)

  • A former member wrote: *sigh* with each stanza, your imagery grows more beautiful. I especially LOVE the way you ended this...you blow me away, darling. ~*Beth*~

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