Comments by All Members
- "Story of my life. If your interested, I would be glad to compare notes. Cut your losses my fiend and keep looking, you'll trip over it when you least expect it. Good luck and good work. Brother of loss, theemptyman"
Posted by Unknown on "Something to make me whole" by Bloodofdeadpoets
- "There wasn't any great imagery or symbols (that I saw) in this one. Also lacked punctuation and the rhyming seemed forced. There are good thoughts here and I like the parodoxes, just need some better wording in places."
Posted by Unknown on "Divided" by Bloodofdeadpoets
- "just because it's not an extremely lengthed write doesn't mean it's simple...sometimes fewer words tell a more complex story than a picture does with its thousands of words+Fallen One+"
Posted by The Fallen Angel on "Untitled" by Bloodofdeadpoets
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