You and Me

By Bloodofdeadpoets

I use to think this world was made to go against you and me
But when we found one another I thought that we would never cease to be
That our souls together would last for eternity
But at this point in our lives eternity we will never see
The tearing apart of our souls is breaking every bone in my body
And now since I am alone I hear death’s cruel melody
Because your not with me anymore there is no meaning to my life
So when death comes with his shallow soul ill smile and welcome the strife

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Copyright 2003 bloodofdeadpoets
Published on Sunday, March 9, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Trichotillomaniac On Friday, September 12, 2003, Trichotillomaniac (42)By person wrote:

    I know the exact feeling of this poem, time and time again...I really liked it, I could feel the poem in many ways..

  • A former member wrote: very touching to me.renew your account & write more!

  • Rebel_Angel On Friday, May 2, 2003, Rebel_Angel (321)By person wrote:

    nice keep writing

  • Six-Out On Sunday, March 9, 2003, Six-Out (1423)By person wrote:

    Wonderful, I really like. Keep it up. Later.

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