Untitled

By Bloodofdeadpoets

I can feel my brain pleading
With my lungs to start breathing
With my heart to start beating
With my soul to stop yearning
With my eyes to stop burning
With my blood to start flowing
With my emotions to start showing
With my spirit to start glowing
But still I sit here not knowing
What it really wants or needs
So my life slowly concedes
To the hollowness of Death

All comments are greatly appreciated, thanks for reading

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Published on Tuesday, May 13, 2003. Filed under: "Poetry"

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A former member wrote: I cannot explain how well written it is, so I'm just gonna say, read the previous comments and you'll get the idea. Love it ^.^
On Thursday, May 10, 2007, thelostmessenger (110) wrote:

it screams of emotion... it's very flowing and interesting to read
On Wednesday, April 4, 2007, Enigma (90) wrote:

I agree with all the comments others have posted....Great write.
On Tuesday, May 31, 2005, InsipidTouch (32) wrote:

That is completely amazing... I love it.
On Sunday, February 29, 2004, Emptyness Inside Me (171) wrote:

great write, i love fast paced works good job ~Emptyness~
On Monday, September 1, 2003, KittyStryker (710) wrote:

this makes me manic... i fel anxious reading it. breathes fast before the end. interesting...
A former member wrote: That flowed so nicely. And I don't know about anyone else but it sped up the farther I went and then just a sudden stop. I really do like you style.
A former member wrote: Like all of your works before, its absolutly amazing, I have told you once and I will tell you again you are my favorite!
On Tuesday, May 13, 2003, Bloodofdeadpoets (55) wrote:

thanks alone your comments are always appreciated, thanks you very much