Comments by InsipidTouch
- "Yes, I didn't quite seem finished to me either. I think you have something going there though that you could really work well with. I like it so far but it needs a lot more work. "
Posted by InsipidTouch on "Don't Say Goodbye" by smurfalwaz
- "The flower represents the characters life and how she doesn't want change. But by the end she gives in and goes thought the changes just like everyone else."
Posted by InsipidTouch on "Bed of You" by InsipidTouch
- "Good emotion through out the poem. Lets someone know how you really feel. It's something most of us can relate to. It's good. I liked it."
Posted by InsipidTouch on "Never Okay" by Labitina
- "Thank you very much, sir. I think the writing is a little confusing myself but that's the beauty of it. I can use any line I want to relate to something completely different than what it means. By the way, I love how you write."
Posted by InsipidTouch on "Mr. Everything-and-More" by InsipidTouch
- "Um, thanks for the comment and trust me, I'm not into AABB rhyme schemes myself but it doesn't hurt to try different things! Of course, what do I know... You're better than me."
Posted by InsipidTouch on "Optimistic Rose" by InsipidTouch
[Next]
