me..right down to it

By angel_eyes

I have blonde hair
I have strait teeth
and blue eyes
I like the color lavender
I've cheated on boyfriends
But my hair is still blonde
and my teeth are still strait
and I probably won't always like the color lavender
I have lips that smile
I have veins that bleed
My face turns red when im embarrassed
I feel the pain of others
I cry for no reason
I've been selfish since a child
I'm from Kentucky
But I hate it here
But I still bleed and my lips still smile
I have weak shoulders
I have pale skin
I have short nails
Which I bite all the time
My little toe is strange
I write
I used to make wreaths from flowers
I brush my hair before bed
I've cheated on tests
But I still have pale skin
And I still bite my nails
And I probably wont' always have weak shoulders
And I may not always write
But maybe I'll start making wreaths from flowers again

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Copyright 2003 angel_eyes
Published on Tuesday, July 22, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • InsipidTouch On Saturday, December 3, 2005, InsipidTouch (32)By person wrote:

    Heh, that's cool. Has sort of an innocent, this-is-me feel to it. I like it a lot.

  • OLd SouL On Monday, August 18, 2003, OLd SouL (717)By person wrote:

    I really liked the structure, very unique. Unique rocks.

  • Delilah On Friday, July 25, 2003, Delilah (113)By person wrote:

    Wow...this flowed like it was meant to be made...loved this! You're not afraid to admit your flaws..most people are. Bravo! ~Delilah~

  • Six-Out On Wednesday, July 23, 2003, Six-Out (1423)By person wrote:

    I liked you until you cheated on boyfriends, then I wonder why you don't come here and do that!

  • Nomad On Tuesday, July 22, 2003, Nomad (38)By person wrote:

    readable and interesting... nice job

  • finaldestiny On Tuesday, July 22, 2003, finaldestiny (72)By person wrote:

    that was so cool i've never seen a poem written like that, my props!

  • Jonas On Tuesday, July 22, 2003, Jonas (715)By person wrote:

    this was cute... liked it

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