Razorblades

By StAinedNblood

Do you feel me darling?

Crawling through your veins

Singing back a lullaby, you always sang to me

I've falling into your eyes my love

I miss you, I need you like a love struck puppy seeking attention

Your breath like poison fills my lungs

I could die a thousand times from you but never care at all



You hold my heart, you know

Guard it like a treasure

And though you claim your through with me

I can't help thinking it's a lie

But my love this chain is getting too short you see

It's choking me to my last gasping breath

Will you kiss my icy lips one last time?

Would you tell me what you hide?

My darling don't let me die like this

Alone in a grave with many broken hearts




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© 2005 StAinedNblood
Published on Friday, December 2, 2005.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: love so strong it gives a mask to conceal all that is true nicely written

  • A former member wrote: love so strong it gives a mask to conceal all that is true nicely written

  • Bluegirl On Wednesday, September 13, 2006, Bluegirl (177)By person wrote:

    "I've fallen into your eyes my love" This one has such lovely imagery.

  • A former member wrote: i will kiss your icy lips!! very dark write. i loved it.

  • A former member wrote: AH! You have taken my heart in your hands and squeezed every word I've ever wished to whisper into one beautiful piece that I could have never written. *Evangel*

  • InsipidTouch On Saturday, December 3, 2005, InsipidTouch (32)By person wrote:

    That's really good. I liked to this one. It really shows how you really feel and I can sense the emotion. It's awesome.

  • JiNx On Saturday, December 3, 2005, JiNx (98)By person wrote:

    I enjoyed this write a lot. Has a great flow to it, and tragic as well. Nicely done and keep it up. I enjoyed the wording as well.. Hmmm... -JiNx(ie)

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