Razorblades
By StAinedNblood
Do you feel me darling?
Crawling through your veins
Singing back a lullaby, you always sang to me
I've falling into your eyes my love
I miss you, I need you like a love struck puppy seeking attention
Your breath like poison fills my lungs
I could die a thousand times from you but never care at all
You hold my heart, you know
Guard it like a treasure
And though you claim your through with me
I can't help thinking it's a lie
But my love this chain is getting too short you see
It's choking me to my last gasping breath
Will you kiss my icy lips one last time?
Would you tell me what you hide?
My darling don't let me die like this
Alone in a grave with many broken hearts
Unauthorized Copying Is Prohibited.
Ask the author first.
© 2005 StAinedNblood
Comments on "Razorblades"
Log in to post comments.
-
A former member wrote:
love so strong it gives a mask to conceal all that is true nicely written
-
A former member wrote:
love so strong it gives a mask to conceal all that is true nicely written
-
On Wednesday, September 13, 2006, Bluegirl
(177) wrote:
"I've fallen into your eyes my love" This one has such lovely imagery.
-
A former member wrote:
i will kiss your icy lips!! very dark write. i loved it.
-
A former member wrote:
AH! You have taken my heart in your hands and squeezed every word I've ever wished to whisper into one beautiful piece that I could have never written. *Evangel*
-
On Saturday, December 3, 2005, InsipidTouch
(32) wrote:
That's really good. I liked to this one. It really shows how you really feel and I can sense the emotion. It's awesome.
-
On Saturday, December 3, 2005, JiNx
(98) wrote:
I enjoyed this write a lot. Has a great flow to it, and tragic as well. Nicely done and keep it up. I enjoyed the wording as well.. Hmmm... -JiNx(ie)