I'll Never See Your Smile Again
By A Broken Soul
Walked into the room today
And it felt like yesterday
Was another
Five hundred million
Years away
And it’s taken me this long
To figure out
What I want from this world and what the
Stories about
You had came so suddenly
Changing all
And it’s hard to remember anything
At all
Walked into the room today
Never expected to see your face
Sitting next to me
Talking about
Every which way you secretly wanted me
And it’s taken me a minute
To realize
Everything led up to this
All along
And it’s been just a year
Since he’s made me cry
And I miss already
I really do
Another chance to destroy myself
In you
I’d give the world
If you wanted me too
Walked into the room today
Never knew I could feel this way
That I do
Oh god help me
I’ve fallen so badly in love with you
And it’s taken me some time
To understand
That you are all I want and have you I
Never can
I’ve given my life
Just to see you smile
And you couldn’t have cared
Any more for a while
Comments on "I'll Never See Your Smile Again"
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On Thursday, May 26, 2005, PaperPromises
(53) wrote:
There's a beauty to this concept.. perhaps because its a familiar feeling, love it -Cor
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On Monday, February 7, 2005, Beautiful Scars
(175) wrote:
wow, I really can relate to this, you play your emotions well. -Fairy
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A former member wrote:
hmmm.. i like the way your words are expressed.. one critism if you will, be careful with grammar and tense.. i know the feeling of not wanting to bother but it really does help with continuity and flow! just a tip!
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A former member wrote:
by the way "And I miss already
I really do
Another chance to destroy myself
In you" was my favorite part! leaves you with a marvelous desolation... good work!
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A former member wrote:
It was incredible the way you captured my eyes and my soul while I was reading your poem