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gravestones and a lully-bye for my love
By spaniellie
i want to cut you open
to finally have your heart
to bring truth to the feelings
we had from the start
i want to bathe in your blood
while you sleep
i will cut you open
carefully, fast, and deep
i want to climb inside of you
so i will stop feeling cold
i can feel all your feelings
without them being told
and when i feel content
i will climb back out
each stich filled with love
and not one without
i will sew you up so neatly
you would never guess
i spend every night with your heart
quietly in your chest
i only hate you because i love you when i care
when i was cold and naked you left my skin pale and bare
you only love me because you care when i hate you
despite all the actions that never fell through
ive been there for you
i want to cut you open
just to see your insides
i want to see all the things
that you've been trying to hide
i want to slit your throat
to hear your muffled scream
tare out your eyes
so i can watch you dream
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Copyright 2005 spaniellie
Comments on "gravestones and a lully-bye for my love"
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A former member wrote:
I love the intricate... brutality with which this piece is written. Keep writing!
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A former member wrote:
Wow man. This was hot. Last section was brutal. Very cleverly written, enjoyed much-ish-ly. ~Ship!
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A former member wrote:
"i only hate you because i love you when i care" Ohhhhhhh so beautifully stated...this was amazing. Beyond anything that simple word even portrays. Lovely job. *Evangel*
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On Wednesday, September 28, 2005, A Broken Soul
(81)
wrote:
omg do i love this! it's so beautiful... catchy title... but the poem itself is captivating! exactly describes what I want to do sometimes. A Broken Soul~
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On Wednesday, September 28, 2005, Army Barbie
(324) wrote:
All that I want to say has been said by Darkened. Hauntingly lovely.
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A former member wrote:
I love this, its got such amazing imagry and is so powerfull. really enjoyed it. its dark but beautiful. well written, well done...
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