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By darkleprechaun
Come walk with me awhile, let our souls stir the same cosmic dust. Let
me caress all the idiosychrasies that make you so perfect. Come and fly
with me beyond the painful clouds surounding my heart and into the fog
that fills my soul.
Let me tell you all the things I'm so afraid to let out,
Let me do all the things I fear to,
But most of all let me hold you close to me, deep within where most can't
see. I want to show you why I bleed, and why it won't stop.
Come let us be friends... or lovers, as long as we're friends in the
end. Let me show you the beauties I hold inside for fear of laughter...
and please open a door or two so I might see inside you.
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Copyright 2004 darkleprechaun
Published on Saturday, December 18, 2004.
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On Wednesday, December 29, 2004, A Broken Soul
(81)
wrote:
man, this makes me so sad, cuz it reminds me of the past... i love it tho, it expresses what i wanted to say to a certain someone. thanks for writing it. ^Autumn^
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On Tuesday, December 28, 2004, whisperer
(166) wrote:
so warm...comfortable and alive....i see you...may you find shade and peace for you and your voices
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A former member wrote:
beautifully written
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On Saturday, December 18, 2004, Grey Lies
(186) wrote:
lovely...the pain of rejection and love...wonderfully done~
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On Saturday, December 18, 2004, Angst Queen
(370) wrote:
beautiful work, dark
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On Saturday, December 18, 2004, Sin
(1168) wrote:
this is beautiful in both imagery and sentiment ~ Come and fly with me beyond the painful clouds surounding my heart and into the fog that fills my soul~ an exquisite write ~kristy
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On Saturday, December 18, 2004, sIo
(926) wrote:
idiosyncrasies*
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