To You...

By Spiritus_Frumenti

Although my tears may mean nothing
I still wept across the blackest sky
As the cold of mourning consumed my soul tonight

Although my words may be empty
I still said your name a thousand times
As I dreamt of your shadow fading in the distance

Although my mind may be long gone,
I still think I love you
With a heart that grows fallow
With this ending that begins again tomorrow...

Copyright © Juan Antonìo Thomas, 2005

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Published on Wednesday, March 9, 2005. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "To You..."

On Saturday, December 29, 2007, Niemand (355) wrote:

This was heart wrenching...-Gin
A former member wrote: I loved this alot!
On Wednesday, March 30, 2005, Sticky Kitty (241) wrote:

sweetness -kitty
On Thursday, March 10, 2005, purr_verse (1052) wrote:

Nobody does soft melancholy quite the way that you do. I agree with Kristy's comment entirely.
On Thursday, March 10, 2005, Solace (1065) wrote:

i'm suffering a tired mind and weary hands, your mind is a neverending pool of feelings that always touch me...soul to soul, heart to heart...amazing...truly amazing...
On Thursday, March 10, 2005, Sin (1135) wrote:

this was beautiful and soaked in pain and longing...elegantly sad..~kristy
A former member wrote: very well written indeed spiritus, wrenching work.
On Wednesday, March 9, 2005, sIo (898) wrote:

god your work is amazing! it tears me up inside so preciously. i love it. awesome job!
On Wednesday, March 9, 2005, A Broken Soul (80) wrote:

god was that beautiful! i absolutely loved this. Beautifully expressed, words can't describe how this made me feel! ^Autumn^
A former member wrote: this was beautiful and so meaningful. you express such great emotion in this. great write. .....-samone