To You...

By Spiritus_Frumenti


Although my tears may mean nothing
I still wept across the blackest sky
As the cold of mourning consumed my soul tonight


Although my words may be empty
I still said your name a thousand times
As I dreamt of your shadow fading in the distance


Although my mind may be long gone,
I still think I love you
With a heart that grows fallow
With this ending that begins again tomorrow...



Copyright © Juan Antonìo Thomas, 2005

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Copyright 2005 Spiritus_Frumenti
Published on Wednesday, March 9, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Niemand On Saturday, December 29, 2007, Niemand (361)By person wrote:

    This was heart wrenching...-Gin

  • A former member wrote: I loved this alot!

  • Sticky Kitty On Wednesday, March 30, 2005, Sticky Kitty (242)By person wrote:

    sweetness -kitty

  • purr_verse On Thursday, March 10, 2005, purr_verse (1059)By person wrote:

    Nobody does soft melancholy quite the way that you do. I agree with Kristy's comment entirely.

  • Solace On Thursday, March 10, 2005, Solace (1069)By person wrote:

    i'm suffering a tired mind and weary hands, your mind is a neverending pool of feelings that always touch me...soul to soul, heart to heart...amazing...truly amazing...

  • Sin On Thursday, March 10, 2005, Sin (1168)By person wrote:

    this was beautiful and soaked in pain and longing...elegantly sad..~kristy

  • A former member wrote: very well written indeed spiritus, wrenching work.

  • sIo On Wednesday, March 9, 2005, sIo (926)By person wrote:

    god your work is amazing! it tears me up inside so preciously. i love it. awesome job!

  • A Broken Soul On Wednesday, March 9, 2005, A Broken Soul (81)By person wrote:

    god was that beautiful! i absolutely loved this. Beautifully expressed, words can't describe how this made me feel! ^Autumn^

  • A former member wrote: this was beautiful and so meaningful. you express such great emotion in this. great write. .....-samone

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