Possibly the last thing i'll post on DP

By Loserland

(Never) Tip Her

Fuck you
Fuck You to HELL and PLUTO
You stupid fucking bitch
You ugly selfish whore
Conservative cow
Pig of fucking rules
Please swallow your tongue
Or dynamite
And explode into bloody pieces
Burned and smoky
At least kill yourself
For the scummy cunt you are
But first : suck my dick
Metaphorically
Don’t touch me literally
I’m already too infected
A million miles away
May your silly spleen burst like balloons
And your veins leak out
Inside that disgusting body
And tapeworms rip the lining
Of the stomach wall
And your ribs bend and puncture cardiac holes
And you swell in areas that bring great discomfort
And a rash forms inside your skin
And it burns like hell
And your head goes bald
While hair grows on your tits
And you lose the ability to see colors
And you get a cock ring lost in your ass
And you lie in pools of urine
And are force-feed shmagma
What fucking god are you, slut
To rein power over me
Damned to be censored
I hate your motherfucking -
Puke green –
Twisted-fucked –
Lying, bloody, stinking –
Pompous, preppy –
College dyke ingesting –
Shit storing –
Donkey dick lick fucking –
Guts
Thank you

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Copyright 2003 Loser Johnson
Published on Sunday, October 26, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Loserland On Saturday, September 21, 2013, Loserland (113)By person wrote:

    This is actually a vivid proclamation that is in protest to the censorship put forth by Tipper Gore. It is all but null and void these days, but back in the early 90's she was quite a pain in the ass.

  • weyvern On Friday, February 24, 2006, weyvern (80)By person wrote:

    wow this is well good i enjoyed the fury in it!

  • Myrrhkuri the fallen one On Saturday, November 12, 2005, Myrrhkuri the fallen one (94)By person wrote:

    so violent...violence always makes me laugh...thanks!

  • Spiritus_Frumenti On Saturday, October 29, 2005, Spiritus_Frumenti (341)By person wrote:

    nice...rage is great...-l-

  • Savannah On Sunday, November 14, 2004, Savannah (218)By person wrote:

    Holy shit, dude. You need a valium or something. But I will have to remember some of these lines so I can repeat them to my husband when he pisses me off.

  • A Broken Soul On Sunday, November 14, 2004, A Broken Soul (81)By person wrote:

    wow... that's about the beautifullest shit i've ever read! lofl... i love how much crude profanity is in it... it's very releaving... *walks away repeating words to mom and dad* lofl.... ^Autumn^

  • Nesfurata On Friday, October 15, 2004, Nesfurata (58)By person wrote:

    Definately powerful. you're took hatred to a whole new level and I love it, great work -Elizabeth

  • BeautifulCalamity On Tuesday, October 12, 2004, BeautifulCalamity (428)By person wrote:

    this reminds me of mexican seafood from nirvana ..heh.. mm, its good you got this out.. and you definitely portray anger and hate in this well..nice write..

  • AHHH On Wednesday, August 18, 2004, AHHH (187)By person wrote:

    you better post more damn writes because you fucking rock

  • A former member wrote: yes yes yes!! i lovvve this one

  • A former member wrote: hehe.. I like this

  • girlafraid On Wednesday, June 30, 2004, girlafraid (480)By person wrote:

    whoa, i think you just about covered everything...this is insane, but good..

  • A former member wrote: so much hate its sometimes so scary..this is one emotional rollercoster ride..

  • aXe FactoR On Friday, June 4, 2004, aXe FactoR (335)By person wrote:

    wow, so full of anger! calm down mate. lols...very very cool. makes me feel like yelling it...arghhhhhhhh!!!! im loving it! fuckkkkkkk!!!! lols... -MeL-

  • capt_funguy On Sunday, February 22, 2004, capt_funguy (778)By person wrote:

    my god .... total war .... sherman would be proud .... burn everything .... funguy

  • Bloody_Hands On Wednesday, November 26, 2003, Bloody_Hands (20)By person wrote:

    wow. This was so violent, the utter rage in these words makes me see that maybe some of us are human after all. Stunning work here. ~Lynne

  • A former member wrote: wwwwwooooooooooooooooooowwwwwwwwwooooooowwwwwwwwwwwwwoooooooooooowwwwwwwwwwoooooooooooooowwwwwwwwwwwwwwoooooooooooowwwwwwwwwww.....what a relief...now i can take a deep breath..she is bitch bitch bitch bitch.....

  • A former member wrote: Rage is one of the most fun of all human emotions!!! You remind me of me and my insults.. I hatve actual said some of the things you've written here. That make you fucking awesome!! Good Job!! I want MORE inraged poetry, death to sappy love poems..

  • CharlottesWeb On Monday, October 27, 2003, CharlottesWeb (511)By person wrote:

    Oh I do agree!! I usually don't comment on a poem like this...but oh the success you've made of it!! The rage so strong you can't stand to be still really comes out fully in this...wonderful!~JMDW~

  • A Velvet Tongue On Sunday, October 26, 2003, A Velvet Tongue (436)By person wrote:

    can you say this all in one breath?..lol..just wanted to make sure you got it all out...rage and pain are two very powerful emotions..both conveyed here wonderfully

  • Rebel_Angel On Sunday, October 26, 2003, Rebel_Angel (321)By person wrote:

    yes I have to agree... sounds like blind hatered to me. Very Nice, let it all out don't keep it inside.

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