Mr. Everything-and-More

By InsipidTouch

Mr. Chainsaw
How do you keep your eyes closed?
Just rip through my skin
See my insides bleeding through
You cut my heart wide open
Blood dripping on your tiles

Mr. Crime-Investigator
How do you keep your eyes closed?
You can't see through those lens
Never close enough to hear
Disappear through your stained glass
Shatter into the broken night

How can you look into my eyes
Tell me that you love me
Tell me 'I'm always here for you'
When everything that you do,
Never seems to be true?
I don't want to hear your voice
And that's my final choice

Mr. Negative
How do you keep your hands active?
Always moving in the wrong direction
Can you hear me scream?
The yes are always on you
Don't kill yourself now

Mr. Liar
How do you keep your hands active?
Hiding your face doesn't work anymore
Can you feel me burning?
I'm getting under your flesh
You can't torture me again

How can you look into my eyes
Tell me that you love me
Tell me 'I'm always here for you'
When everything you do,
Never seems to be true?
I don't want to hear your voice
And that's my final choice

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Copyright 2005 InsipidTouch
Published on Monday, July 25, 2005.     Filed under: "Lyrics"
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  • stormtalk On Wednesday, July 27, 2005, stormtalk (727)By person wrote:

    Very interesting concept, here... I like Mr. Chainsaw the most. Strong ending with the break into rhyme, too. My only criticism is that it's difficult to tell whether you're writing about single or multiple subjects. Nice work!

  • InsipidTouch On Thursday, July 28, 2005, InsipidTouch (32)By person wrote:

    Thank you very much, sir. I think the writing is a little confusing myself but that's the beauty of it. I can use any line I want to relate to something completely different than what it means. By the way, I love how you write.

  • Ablebody Peckawood On Tuesday, July 26, 2005, Ablebody Peckawood (38)By person wrote:

    I like this one! I'm putting it under favorites

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