Mr. Everything-and-More
By InsipidTouch
Mr. Chainsaw
How do you keep your eyes closed?
Just rip through my skin
See my insides bleeding through
You cut my heart wide open
Blood dripping on your tiles
Mr. Crime-Investigator
How do you keep your eyes closed?
You can't see through those lens
Never close enough to hear
Disappear through your stained glass
Shatter into the broken night
How can you look into my eyes
Tell me that you love me
Tell me 'I'm always here for you'
When everything that you do,
Never seems to be true?
I don't want to hear your voice
And that's my final choice
Mr. Negative
How do you keep your hands active?
Always moving in the wrong direction
Can you hear me scream?
The yes are always on you
Don't kill yourself now
Mr. Liar
How do you keep your hands active?
Hiding your face doesn't work anymore
Can you feel me burning?
I'm getting under your flesh
You can't torture me again
How can you look into my eyes
Tell me that you love me
Tell me 'I'm always here for you'
When everything you do,
Never seems to be true?
I don't want to hear your voice
And that's my final choice
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Comments on "Mr. Everything-and-More"
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On Wednesday, July 27, 2005, stormtalk
(727) wrote:
Very interesting concept, here... I like Mr. Chainsaw the most. Strong ending with the break into rhyme, too. My only criticism is that it's difficult to tell whether you're writing about single or multiple subjects. Nice work!
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On Thursday, July 28, 2005, InsipidTouch
(32) wrote:
Thank you very much, sir. I think the writing is a little confusing myself but that's the beauty of it. I can use any line I want to relate to something completely different than what it means. By the way, I love how you write.
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On Tuesday, July 26, 2005, Ablebody Peckawood
(38) wrote:
I like this one! I'm putting it under favorites