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The Secret
By Rebel_Angel
I have a secret,
One I've kept for some time.
Too worried about the outcome,
Worried about what you will say.
Will you say anything,
Or will you pretend you never knew?
Would you string me along just because
you knew you could?
Would you reject me?
Would you be happy...confused?
WHAT WOULD YOU DO?
If I knew the answer maybe my secret wouldn't have to be a
secret anymore.
But your reaction is unknown,
So this little secret is mine,
Only mine.
But maybe in time it can be ours.
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Copyright 2004 Rebel_Angel
Published on Thursday, January 29, 2004.
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Comments on "The Secret"
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A former member wrote:
I love this poem it's so true.We all have our secrets.
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A former member wrote:
Astonashing work!!!! I seriosly don't have any words... Simply amazing...
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A former member wrote:
i have felt like this many a time.
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On Friday, September 30, 2005, Mistress Shadow
(252)
wrote:
Excellent word choice! I love it! ~T~
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On Sunday, July 18, 2004, Spikes_of_Blue
(42) wrote:
wow i like this work alot...very touching and insightful...beautiful work
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On Friday, April 9, 2004, urbanhumility
(1175) wrote:
well done....urban
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On Friday, April 2, 2004, Jenni
(40) wrote:
hmm... secret, makes me think about the secret i have... and i think i'ma act on it.... thanks -J
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On Sunday, February 22, 2004, Lynaes
(859) wrote:
I relate to this so deeply it scares me. Great write, really awesome. ~L
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On Thursday, February 5, 2004, Midnight Phoenix
(240) wrote:
I've written a couple pieces with the same theme in mind. My advice to you is to take your chances and display your feelings. To keep them a secret is worse than rejection in the long run.
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On Monday, February 2, 2004, frost bite
(43) wrote:
thats a cool poem, thats the way everyone feals not knowing reactions... either your in love or gay hahaha, can't tell which one though heh. great write
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On Friday, January 30, 2004, blackdarkness
(228) wrote:
I like the questions st first and the end kinda answers...
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On Friday, January 30, 2004, Blacken_Heart
(20) wrote:
I Like this one alot, Really good.!
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On Friday, January 30, 2004, Rebel_Angel
(321) wrote:
Thank you for the comments and I'm really suprised that people didn't figure out my "secret"...I thought it was so obvious... Well maybe only to me because I wrote the poem. Thanks again everyone!
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On Friday, January 30, 2004, Abbyernathie
(61) wrote:
me likes! great write! another masterpiece to add to the collection.
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On Thursday, January 29, 2004, hopeless
(51) wrote:
i love the words you used it sounds like someone who wants to tell a secret but in some way cannot... i love it! ~hopeless
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On Thursday, January 29, 2004, LovedByAMiracle
(51) wrote:
i liked this write. it conveyed a lot of confusion and emotion. i wanna know the secret!
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On Thursday, January 29, 2004, Aurora_Light
(472) wrote:
nice job again u seem to be getting better and better, and i agree maybe u should share it but its all up to u
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On Thursday, January 29, 2004, The_Scavenger
(30) wrote:
Great write. this poem i can tell has a lot of emotion in it. Great choice of words you couldnt have picked them better.
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