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Don't Say Goodbye
By smurfalwaz
Don't wake me up
Just let me be
In this place
That I call free
Your voice,
To me
Is a lullabye
Just leave me here
But don't say goodbye.
This doesn't seem finished to me...but comment if you like...
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Copyright 2004 smurfalwaz
Published on Monday, May 10, 2004.
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"Poetry"
Comments on "Don't Say Goodbye"
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On Friday, December 30, 2005, drop dead des
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wrote:
It may not be finished, but it has great potential.
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On Saturday, December 3, 2005, InsipidTouch
(32) wrote:
Yes, I didn't quite seem finished to me either. I think you have something going there though that you could really work well with. I like it so far but it needs a lot more work.
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