Don't Say Goodbye

By smurfalwaz

Don't wake me up
Just let me be
In this place
That I call free

Your voice,
To me
Is a lullabye
Just leave me here
But don't say goodbye.



This doesn't seem finished to me...but comment if you like...

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Copyright 2004 smurfalwaz
Published on Monday, May 10, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • drop dead des On Friday, December 30, 2005, drop dead des (7)By person wrote:

    It may not be finished, but it has great potential.

  • InsipidTouch On Saturday, December 3, 2005, InsipidTouch (32)By person wrote:

    Yes, I didn't quite seem finished to me either. I think you have something going there though that you could really work well with. I like it so far but it needs a lot more work.

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