On the Day I Die
By maddin foxxxy
On the day i die you'll know
that you will never see me again
yet you will feel my soul
caressing every pain you gain.
On the day i die you'll know
you did not give to me enough
that you could give much more
when mostly you played tough.
On the day i die you'll know
i was in 2 things very right:
that i'd be the first one to go
and that you'd miss me that night.
On the day i die you'll know
you will never love as you did
you will never kiss as you did before
there will be a missing thing you need.
On the day i die you'll know
you should've said what you didn't say
and praying won't make me come
and crying won't take regret away.
On the day i die you'll know
it was me who you loved the most
and realize, until then, that i'm gone
that you'll have to love a ghost.
On the day i die you'll know
you should've forgiven that day
when i begged you for so long
yesterday i stood, but that day there i'll lay.
On the day i die you'll know
nothing will be ever the same
love or you will stop to grow
you will try to forget my name.
On the day I die you'll know
there is a promise as to never be apart
you'll lean to me and place a rose,
stare into my face and know you killed my heart.
ON THE DAY I DIE I'LL KNOW
YOU'LL TRY TO THROW ME AGAIN
AND FROM DEATH I WILL SEE,
BUT THIS TIME WITH NO PAIN.
Comments on "On the Day I Die"
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On Tuesday, January 30, 2007, XxDarkPhilosopherxX
(3) wrote:
This is one of the most amazing poems I've seen! Absolutely amazing!
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On Monday, December 26, 2005, weyvern
(80) wrote:
brings a tear to the eye! it is a well plotted, beautifuly written and i can picture someone saying this! very good
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A former member wrote:
I liked it for the fact that it has such... satisfying feeling of what has happend in the past
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On Sunday, August 22, 2004, Dayer
(162) wrote:
wow, amazing
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A former member wrote:
Wow.. Amazing.. Just amazing....
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On Thursday, June 10, 2004, smurfalwaz
(13) wrote:
Wow...this is really good...I started to tear up...it was very touching.
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On Thursday, June 10, 2004, frost bite
(43) wrote:
oooh man, that ending rocked, wow.. it all lead up to such a great end. Definatly a great poem.
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On Sunday, August 17, 2003, Drea
(1443) wrote:
the words touched me.. Great read ~Drea~
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On Saturday, May 24, 2003, CharlottesWeb
(511) wrote:
Oh, very compelling. This does not only make your point so very clear and poignat...but it also makes the reader consider who they have treated like drin. Great work here.~DW~
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A former member wrote:
clap clap clap!! i raise my glass of blood to thee..awesome job--melorra
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A former member wrote:
I agree with darkness_descends 100%
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On Sunday, March 16, 2003, darkblue
(3) wrote:
everyone could send this out to their "special no one" :D *hint hint* Jeremy *hint hint*
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On Tuesday, March 25, 2003, darkness_descends
(12) wrote:
You should never take love for granted because as quickly as it was found it can disappear and leave eternal pain and regret in it's place. Great job! ~Darkness~
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On Tuesday, February 25, 2003, liquid_emotion
(323) wrote:
You never know what you had until it's gone... If they could only ache as we do...