Divided

By Bloodofdeadpoets

I am consumed by darkness yet I worship the light
For it was not my choice to be on this side of the fight
The darkness is full of pain and pressure on my brain
But my lust for the light is causing me such great strain
My heart has been blackened by my souls damnation
But I look at the light and it offers emancipation
My corruption runs so deep that is has become part of me
and the demons in side me blur my vision so i cant see
I am a warrior of darkness yet the light guides my way
So I respect it and do not take many lives during the day
And with all that said and done I have nothing else to say

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Copyright 2003 bloodofdeadpoets
Published on Sunday, March 2, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Dilated View On Tuesday, December 29, 2009, Dilated View (583)By person wrote:

    The struggle between doing what our inner demons require and what our minds tell us is appropriate. I can get down with that. :)

  • Lawless Fighter On Wednesday, January 2, 2008, Lawless Fighter (37)By person wrote:

    I like the freshness of the rhyme scheme, not a whole lot of poems can pull off that many syllables between rhyming words. . .as far as demons inside. . i have much to relate to there . . .very nice write

  • sIo On Monday, November 1, 2004, sIo (926)By person wrote:

    so true to the hope are the warriors of doubt.

  • BoldSolitude On Wednesday, March 3, 2004, BoldSolitude (214)By person wrote:

    I liked the line "For it was not my choice to be on this side of the fight" Itotally relate.

  • A former member wrote: There wasn't any great imagery or symbols (that I saw) in this one. Also lacked punctuation and the rhyming seemed forced. There are good thoughts here and I like the parodoxes, just need some better wording in places.

  • A former member wrote: AH I really like this one...i appreaciate a good write.

  • A former member wrote: man i really enjoy reading your work...write on!

  • liquid_emotion On Monday, March 3, 2003, liquid_emotion (323)By person wrote:

    ahhh... good vs. evil... the battle continues!

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