Vampire

By Bloodofdeadpoets

My life is tormented with every sunrise
But when the sun falls another victim dies
The blood is so sweet that its taken my soul
And my soul is now warm from its usual cold
At one time I felt pain with the taking of a life
But now it has become natural and i enjoy the strife
i have become faster and stronger with my new form
So i take lives quickly just like a quiet storm

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Copyright 2003 bloodofdeadpoets
Published on Sunday, March 9, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Selenophile On Sunday, May 15, 2016, Selenophile (22)By person wrote:

    I adore Vampyres as well. Beautiful horror poem.

  • A former member wrote: ya i love vamp. poems u should read mine.....not sure how good but its getting there....ps great job!

  • Fourknaz On Wednesday, November 3, 2004, Fourknaz (6)By person wrote:

    Are you really a vampire? Cause this is how I feel when I awake... :-)

  • Loserland On Wednesday, October 8, 2003, Loserland (113)By person wrote:

    Love the vampire poems! keep em coming. and if ya get a chance read mine

  • The Fallen Angel On Monday, September 8, 2003, The Fallen Angel (234)By person wrote:

    i'm tired of vampires being portrayed so goofy in these days...at one time i didn't care for them because of it until i found something intriguing about them...the intrigue that you've brough here+Fallen One+

  • A former member wrote: The true meaning of vampire, many want to become then don't after they see what it's like, few are willing to give their freedom. I enjoyed it very much, you understand what it's like...

  • Sky Singer On Tuesday, July 29, 2003, Sky Singer (153)By person wrote:

    ahh.... if only Anne Rice's characters were real... your imagery was excellent. bravo!

  • A former member wrote: I like this one alot. well done. ~gwen

  • A former member wrote: sweet, very well pictured. :)

  • A former member wrote: i agree with corrupted litle girl.AWESOME!

  • CorruptedLittleGirl On Tuesday, March 25, 2003, CorruptedLittleGirl (243)By person wrote:

    Awesome poem! Keep writing.

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