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silent doom
By Bloodofdeadpoets
Quietly I sit in the corner over there
Curled up in a ball hoping no one will see me here
Why am I destined to feel this dreadful pain
All this increasing pressure on my aching brain
Sometimes I just feel like I should be slain
But thoughts like that are left for the insane
All of this comes with my ever so silent doom
And eventually this whole world it will consume
The demons inside us continue to fight for their lives
And those that are free have swung their deadly knives
But those that are trapped can only cloud our eyes
Filling up our heads with all their deceitful lies
That’s why I sit in this corner releasing horrific cries
Because I chose the wrong side and lost all human ties
And when you have no one the minds and the body dies
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Copyright 2003 bloodofdeadpoets
Published on Sunday, March 2, 2003.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Friday, October 19, 2007, Distorted_Reality
(101)
wrote:
i love it =)
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On Saturday, October 18, 2003, maddin foxxxy
(358) wrote:
Amazing ending...made me think bout lots of things..specially in a life followed by a vast of loneliness...excellent work!
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A former member wrote:
absolutly fabulouse!
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A former member wrote:
I love it! Esp: "demons....lies" Wow. Really great piece
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On Friday, May 2, 2003, Rebel_Angel
(321) wrote:
It is sad but good
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A former member wrote:
loved it man!Renew your account man
you've got a fan!
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A former member wrote:
not bad not bad...but i agree with my friend ^above me^, sounds like it yearns for another line...but it's a great piece, all the same, line or no line XDglass~~K
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A former member wrote:
sounds kinda unfinished but not to bad if you ask me........
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On Monday, March 3, 2003, liquid_emotion
(323) wrote:
:(
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