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Untitled
By Bloodofdeadpoets
Eternal flames engulf my veins causing immense pain
My body tries to maintain but It’s far to much strain
I cry tears of blood ever so thick again and again
That’s why I sit and wish for death he is my only friend
Why must I bare the weight of men who have no cares
They do what they want when they want with no fears
People live their senseless lives not caring who they hurt
Living meaningless lives until they lay beneath the dirt
Even though they are dead and gone their cruelty lives
Because the flames that engulf our hearts seldom forgives
The hatred and detestation always makes the flames grow
But we who bare the hottest flames never let the pain show
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Copyright 2003 bloodofdeadpoets
Published on Wednesday, May 14, 2003.
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On Wednesday, April 4, 2007, Enigma
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wrote:
Awsome write...I loved it....
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On Friday, August 6, 2004, GirlintheBox
(41) wrote:
love it *krystal*
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On Saturday, May 8, 2004, sixsixnine
(477) wrote:
fuck fuck fuck fuckfuck yeahhh!!!!!!! i love this piece great write *669*
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On Saturday, May 8, 2004, Six-Out
(1435) wrote:
Fuckity fuck?
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On Wednesday, September 24, 2003, SilentStalker
(1066) wrote:
Had to check your work, and glad I did, it's great. I'll be around a while...
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On Friday, September 19, 2003, Dancing_Monkey
(1246) wrote:
*claps* that ending kicked ass.. good poem.. Monkey
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On Monday, September 8, 2003, The Fallen Angel
(235) wrote:
you've said here something of always wanted to say but just haven't gotten around to it...I guess i can relate too...+Fallen One+
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On Monday, September 8, 2003, Trichotillomaniac
(42) wrote:
It's dark and deep, your writing is definetly unique, it doesn't hold that cliché darkness that some poems do..I loved it..
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A former member wrote:
Wow...I love you style...and your wording..."we who bare the hottest flames never let the pain show" That's an amazing line.
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On Sunday, June 15, 2003, SeekingNirvana
(29) wrote:
you have a very unique style indeed. great write! keep writing!
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On Thursday, May 15, 2003, GothicBlack
(186) wrote:
A prayer only speaking the truth not bullshit lies like most. brilliant and wondrous. ~gothic~
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A former member wrote:
Simple, and beautiful, the words flowed so well...i love it again!
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On Monday, September 8, 2003, The Fallen Angel
(235) wrote:
just because it's not an extremely lengthed write doesn't mean it's simple...sometimes fewer words tell a more complex story than a picture does with its thousands of words+Fallen One+
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On Tuesday, September 16, 2003, Crystal Passion
(221) wrote:
I'm with fallen
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A former member wrote:
Amen... it sounds like a prayer...a very nice and dark prayer mind you yet still a prayer....
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