Something to make me whole

By Bloodofdeadpoets

I stand alone now a broken man a broken soul
Looking for something in this life to make me whole
Loneliness is my true friend this I do know
Because in my hardest times it still wont go
I’m looking, searching for the one thing to guide me
But I’m still cloaked in darkness I trust it to hide me
I desperately need an answer but I’m scared that I will find
Something even more confusing that should have stayed behind
But yet I still search for this piece that very important sign
The more I search and look I lose more of what is mine
Still I concentrate hard letting my thoughts intertwine
But in the end I’m still confused and tangled like a vine

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Published on Thursday, May 8, 2003. Filed under: "Poetry"

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January 13th, 2012

Comments on "Something to make me whole"

A former member wrote: The fear of moving forward and the sting of staying behind. well written.
A former member wrote: I like this a lot.
On Sunday, January 15, 2012, boneplate (56) wrote:

an oldie but a goodie..."But yet I still search for this piece." Well said, great thoughts, sad, but well done.......
A former member wrote: i love the feeling this creates nice flow of words beautiful excellent work
A former member wrote: I know a man who does live like this... In fact he has been my muse on a couple of works.... Amazing..
On Friday, October 19, 2007, Distorted_Reality (100) wrote:

your style of writing is amazing =0
On Saturday, April 29, 2006, mywristshurt (405) wrote:

awesome, beautiful piece.. this poem reminds me of one of my own.. fantastic write.
On Thursday, September 9, 2004, Delphoid-Q (213) wrote:

Nice flow... Left my head spinning.
A former member wrote: Story of my life. If your interested, I would be glad to compare notes. Cut your losses my fiend and keep looking, you'll trip over it when you least expect it. Good luck and good work. Brother of loss, theemptyman
On Friday, September 26, 2003, SilentStalker (1047) wrote:

That's cool...you capture the feeling well...I like this...
A former member wrote: ha ha...amazing how confusing it gets searching for something and we don't even know what we're searching for. Man do I feel this one. Very nice.
A former member wrote: nice captivity of an ever-present feeling. Always digging, but never sure for what, yet certain that it's there.
A former member wrote: Absolutly amazing, ...we shall never know what it is we are really searching for...keep up the good work!
A former member wrote: Wow, this is really strong and I love it!... wow.
On Thursday, May 8, 2003, IceDragoness (193) wrote:

i completely agree, loneliness- the ultimate greatness? or evil? I'll never know.. but while I think on that, This made me think (which is a Good thing) and has a nice flow to it, well done ~Dawn