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Dark Kiss
By Bloodofdeadpoets
My fangs of ice can pierce your flesh like broken glass
Tormenting human souls like demons from their past
As I walk by her not a sound can be heard
I am silent but deadly like the talons of a bird
Slowly I approach her as she gazes into my eyes
I tell her not to look to deeply for they tell deceitful lies
Yet she does not care gazing deep into my soul
My body starts to twitch but yet I maintain control
She slowly walks towards me and her talons touch my face
It is only at this time that she reveals her true race
She slowly bares her fangs and my body get a chill
She then moves towards my neck to make her sweet kill
As I feel her touch me my soul is filled with bliss
Then I bare my fangs and we share this dark kiss
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Copyright 2003 bloodofdeadpoets
Published on Tuesday, April 15, 2003.
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"Poetry"
Comments on "Dark Kiss"
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On Tuesday, June 1, 2010, ubiquitoussoul
(346)
wrote:
I dont usually read vampire poems..but this held my deepest interest..the rhyme was smooth and I like how the picture unfolded and closed with that last line.very good job!
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On Wednesday, May 16, 2007, thelostmessenger
(112) wrote:
this is really good... it takes you to that moment. very nice. *messenger
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On Tuesday, September 16, 2003, Crystal Passion
(221) wrote:
Wow excellent piece for this genre!
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A former member wrote:
This reminds me...I miss watching Buffy. ARG.
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On Tuesday, June 24, 2003, celestine_moon
(46) wrote:
wow. i really do enjoy all of your works. great stuff. -kitty
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On Monday, April 28, 2003, hate_doll
(265) wrote:
mm...I love vampire themed writing...this just takes the cake...I love it!
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On Sunday, April 20, 2003, liquid_emotion
(323) wrote:
i don't usually like vampire themes... but that was really great! Nice twist, short enough not to lose me, and such a great "moment" poem.
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A former member wrote:
Wow I really liked this one!! Your very good with rhyme....Great job!!
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A former member wrote:
i enjoyed this piece as well. verynice:)
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