Comments by All Members
- "Better than a lot of poems about sex that i've read...but this just sums it up. Not a lot of details and still gets a heavy point across. Very well done."
Posted by Unknown on "Whore Whore" by SummerCoat
- "Nicely written, but dont fear for years that if he says no, that it will crush you. Trust your heart, it has brought you here for reason that you see him. Take a deep breath, run to him, dont say anything, just run to him and hugg him so tightly, then run away, 10 feet away, turn back and just look at him once more, then run off again. You dont have to speak, your actions will be a whole volume in a book to him. Trust that he will see the unspoken need. If he doesn't get it, then he isnt the one, keep looking. And good luck, trust your heart. Just do it and be amazed."
Posted by Unknown on "I'm Happy" by SummerCoat
- "This poem is great! I'm from outside the States but it's still relatable and just wow. I totally see where you're coming from there. Brilliant."
Posted by Unknown on "imprisoned nation " by SummerCoat
- "My gosh! This is great. I felt this way after my only meaningful relationship where I actually was in love with (still am after 6 yrs). It fucks you up in so many ways & the feeling of being so weak, powerless & vulnerable ends up making you bitter & hate what has become of you. You captured that feeling well."
Posted by Deathkitten on "HATE" by SummerCoat
- "For all the work of similar subject matter I do on mainly the same topic, I don't think I've ever read a piece that expressed my own sentiments as accurately as this one."
Posted by Ortolan on "imprisoned nation " by SummerCoat
- "wow this is beautiful...this is a strong feeling someone can have..believe me i know well...this is amazing great write (: "
Posted by Star on "beautiful regret" by SummerCoat
- "This hits close to home so I feel you. Write it out dear....and remember...the hate was there before you ever were..dont be so hard on yourself. I also agree to the comment below."
Posted by Clydes_Bonnie on "Too Much A Beast" by SummerCoat
- "Is this poem true? If it is, I hope you have or will get out of it soon... No one really deserves this, friend... "
Posted by Unknown on "Too Much A Beast" by SummerCoat
- "Johnnie B. Good - wonderfully wrought tribute and portrayal of the lightness of love and the all-encompassing euphoria, may it last forever, cheers and much enjoyed the rapture."
Posted by dwells on "I'm Happy" by SummerCoat
- "nice poem summer, theres a tremendous amount of pain in your words, and i felt that. you covered all the bases for the breaking point. its depression in your words i hear, and you need a hug! a very deep personal poem and i loved it. thanks for sharing. awesome!"
Posted by haunted on "phantom restraints (closure-the last child-abuse poem) " by SummerCoat
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