Comments by All Members
- "This.. the unmistakable pain. Its beyond words what this made me feel. Thank you for the write.. "
Posted by Unknown on "Wedding day blues" by Lylani
- "truly an amazing write. words for thought. Every one has the right to make their own decisions. unfortunately, many people allow other to it for them. Only you have the power to choose! "
Posted by Unknown on "The cost" by Lylani
- "I really love this piece. Not only does it portray my love of books so perfectly (but all of us book lovers have had moments like this) but also because you have done an excellent job at describing how we can rekindle old loves that were once forgotten. Great job and keep up the good work! "
Posted by Unknown on "A good book or an old lover" by Lylani
- "I love the smell of dusty old books. The way the pages sound as you flip them. *sigh* I should get the book again from the library I've read so many times. I'm glad I came across this. Definitely a bookmark. Thank you. ~xo*xo~ "
Posted by Star on "A good book or an old lover" by Lylani
- "I love the imagery that you used. Great poem. I just wish the second half was a bit longer, because I wanted more."
Posted by Constantly Connie on "Chalk Dust" by Lylani
- "omg so good, how have I not saw your name pop up yet :O anyway I've saw it now so thanks for the post, added to my favourites :)"
Posted by Unknown on "The cost" by Lylani
- "Thanks... This is such wonderful advice- and as you can see everybody else thinks so too who commented below. Love the way it is written. Then the last line is a total full stop if you know what I mean~ Demanding and final... "So choose" I loveee this."
Posted by Symbol on "The cost" by Lylani
- "Astra really said it. This is truly a power-ballad. I felt like this needs to be spoken. This would does righteous on a stage."
Posted by Kaleidoscope_Heart on "The cost" by Lylani
- "excellent advice indeed. This felt like a power ballad, slap in the face. I loved it. "
Posted by Dei on "The cost" by Lylani
- "Most excellent advice, turn another page and get on with your life - it's never worth it, cheers!"
Posted by dwells on "The cost" by Lylani
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