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Between The Sheets
By Lylani
I wrote you letters when you left
Just so you'd know I was fine
I told you all the gossip
I told you nothing changes
How math still sucks
And who's dating who
Between the sheets of nothing important
Are all the things I never told you
How much I miss you
How nights last forever and I cry myself to sleep
I told you that my mind's in constant replay
of that goodbye kiss we never had
Then with breathless words
And invisible ink
I scream your name
And tell you I love you
I seal the envelope with a hopeless kiss
And post it to the land of no reply
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© 2008 Lylani
Comments on "Between The Sheets"
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On Wednesday, March 21, 2018, Just Dave
(448)
wrote:
Beautiful and sad. So well written. JD
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On Wednesday, October 15, 2008, Leith Plunkett
(237) wrote:
This is beautiful. Lovely imagery. I really did feel my heart beating faster while reading this. Lovely as always :-)
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On Wednesday, October 15, 2008, veingo
(526) wrote:
This was far from what I expected, and I'm happy to be suprised. Well done. ^V^
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On Wednesday, October 15, 2008, estherbell
(52) wrote:
p.a.i.n.f.u.l. to read this.there is no worse thing than crying for "the land of no reply".I like it,especially the second half.
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On Wednesday, October 15, 2008, skully
(42) wrote:
Really liked this. Its the letters we don't send that matter, eh?
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A former member wrote:
The way the sheets are two... that upon which is written the life one never knows, and that between which life struggles on in 'his?' absence; at once Bartelby and then Heloise... purloined letters one and all...
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A former member wrote:
Honest and selfless write...nice courage.
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