Comments by All Members
- "VERY good words and good advice, SH. Just very difficult to want to let go. Hold onto flame or fall into loveless oblivion? Loving her is/was the best thing about my life. Believing I was truly wanted was my price. I no longer belong to myself. The logic inside me tells me you're right, but my heart is a fool."
Posted by Scarrzz on "Empty Dark" by Scarrzz
- "I am honored, Lux. * * *
I suppose one option would be to write something from a temptresses point of view. I know your question was rhetorical, but you may consider this a challenge if you so desire. I bet you have it inside, and I look forward to reading whatever you construct."
Posted by Scarrzz on "Letting Go" by Scarrzz
- "Touching and heartfelt, give ur love to someone who will reciprocate, instead of false idols....."
Posted by Unknown on "Empty Dark" by Scarrzz
- "great poem! I like the depiction of traveling for life is a journey and the lonely tend to wander. the second to last verse is only thee lines but says it all. I enjoyed remembering my own long nights wandering the streets of downtown. Thank You"
Posted by Unknown on "Journey to Nowhere" by Scarrzz
- "Sometimes we want to move in opposite directions in search of happiness, but that would disintegrate us from the inside, still we always try to do it even if its against laws of physics. Good poem there"
Posted by Melancholic VIncent on "Fallen" by Scarrzz
- "I love this poem and how it's not cliche. I find it difficult to write poems about a lost love without it sounding like it's already been done or that it's corny or melodramatic. I am very fond of the first line because that's what drew my attention to read the rest of the poem. Still, my favorite line is "Razor blades carving the fascia from the insides of my ribcage would be kinder." Another favorite is "There is no moment when I can breathe./ You are lost to me,/ and I am lost to myself." I think it's a superb write."
Posted by Unknown on "Without You" by Scarrzz
- "Six years after falling, the hopeless loneliness still makes my guts wrench every day and my soul scream out for help or death, but there is neither help nor relief. I have no one to tell, so I'll write it down here. My quiet scream."
Posted by Scarrzz on "Ever Since Never" by Scarrzz
- "Another year, still sick at my stomach every day from grief and loneliness. I just can't give up loving her. It was too powerful once I started, or maybe it's the nature of the love itself. "
Posted by Scarrzz on "Remembrances" by Scarrzz
- "i love how you make the words sing, like a love song whispered . beautiful!"
Posted by natalie on "I Wonder" by Scarrzz
- "I'm honored that you find it so. This was where I began my descent. I looked and thought I found. I dared to hope again. I chose unwisely. It would have killed me were it not for my love for those that cared about me. I live because I refused to hurt them, not for myself. I pray someone nourishes you with water and love, but choose that person wisely, because you will be giving them power to destroy you as well as save you."
Posted by Scarrzz on "Dying of Loneliness" by Scarrzz
- "..."I carry you within me"...E E
Cummings wrote "I carry your heart
with me. I carry it in my heart." It seems
the same thought floats in the air lke a
virus, sporadically infecting different
poets...this is beautiful..."
Posted by FadedBlues on "My Moonflower" by Scarrzz
- "As for myself, the pain never goes away, but it diminishes as emotion is avoided. I suppose it's like dying inside. It doesn't hurt as much when you don't allow yourself to feel anything. Not an elegant solution, but in some cases, the only one available, at least so far. * * * In my case, after five years of being alone, I finally learned to take some joy in small things. It's a crime of waste to have this love and not be able to give it, but at least I know it's real, even if it has killed me. I know it when I shut everything else down and allow myself on occasion to think of her, just for a moment. Too long and I will break myself again, but for just a moment I can still feel love. * * * That isn't to say I don't think of her every few minutes in addition to continually feeling the emptiness inside, but I don't let the deep emotions overwhelm me. Perhaps you would enjoy reading my little treatise entitled "What is Love?" I'd be interested to hear what you think of my perceptions there. * Thanks much for the comment."
Posted by Scarrzz on "Beneath the Mask" by Scarrzz
- "So moving, i have been there and the pain, there is no words to describe that kind of pain.. Very slowly and tasking that pain is becoming a dull edge,,, Only when i dont think of him... I have rathered died than live with out him,; Tho he lives and lives on.. Thank you Scarrzz for writing this... I couldnt have said better,, I still wonder does or will the pain ever go away? Peace.."
Posted by Unknown on "Beneath the Mask" by Scarrzz
- "It's actually amazing how I just connected with that ... Hello there and happy new year to you..."
Posted by Devilish on "Happy New Year" by Scarrzz
- "Loneliness can be a harsh and bitter place.
Reminds me of the end of Blade Runner.
"All those moments will be lost in time, like tears in rain'" Rutger Hauer"
Posted by Unknown on "Cold" by Scarrzz
- "Thanks, Natalie. It does help to be heard, and it helps even more to feel understood. ~Hugs~ ...but I'm still sorry that you understand."
Posted by Scarrzz on "Journey to Nowhere" by Scarrzz
- "I would welcome the company. Walking alone gets old eventually and the best journeys are meant to be shared."
Posted by Scarrzz on "Journey to Nowhere" by Scarrzz
- "Thanks, Evangeline. This is probably the most revealing piece I've written about my inner psyche."
Posted by Scarrzz on "Beneath the Mask" by Scarrzz
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