Comments by All Members
- "Always a pleasure to work with you. This still stirs feelings every time I read it. Thank you Stephen...Thank you."
Posted by Narcissa on "Remember Me This Way." by Aleas
- "the ache of this started at the first section and built ever so softly through to the end... a whispered hemming along all the lovely visions and language until the end just made the floor finally give way... outstanding"
Posted by NikesRain on "Begging; Still." by Aleas
- "This line will stay with me for a long time (Under the dusk of my executioner hood) very dark but somehow beautiful. I love the use of nature when describing objects. I was meaning to also leave a comment on your last piece but once again words could not write what I wanted to say. Please know you have a gift. Few poems that I have been touched by leave me lost for words. Thankyou for sharing
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Posted by Leith Plunkett on "Begging; Still." by Aleas
- "The words wont form what I feel I need to say. So I will leave it at an incredible journey was shared, and a wonderful talent you have. I hurt to read this piece as beautifully written as it was. "
Posted by Leith Plunkett on "Begging; Still." by Aleas
- "*dies* i have no fucking idea how i managed to never really read any of your works. WOW. that's all i can say and that last stanza was WOWOWOWOWOWOW!!! WOW. lol. -mars"
Posted by Mars on "Please; Don't." by Aleas
- "Mix of emotions from this. Some lines I absolutely loved, some parts (or themes) little things in me disagreed with. But that's just me :P As a piece of writing, this was great and I think I'll be coming back"
Posted by Echoes of Orpheus on "Ocean Promises." by Aleas
- "that last stanza is enough to leech the life out of anyone... but oddly enough, it makes me want to change... something."
Posted by Sketso on "Ocean Promises." by Aleas
- "...and for the record, why apologize for the length? It does what you intended, I think. I don't think an apology is owed."
Posted by Sketso on "Begging; Still." by Aleas
- "This was brutally beautiful...you know its love when you are left hurting but sometimes you have to seek solace in the peaceful parts even when they are only memories."
Posted by Narcissa on "Begging; Still." by Aleas
- "I was almost in the comment box with such words as... 'what a light, airy break from the DP world...' then *boom*. Lovely turnaround into the 'price to pay'."
Posted by Sketso on "Begging; Still." by Aleas
- "in the begining, i felt light. and then near the end i felt like a rock at the bottom of the ocean. this had that effect on me. you're a gifted writer. -mars"
Posted by Mars on "Begging; Still." by Aleas
- "this is the first poem I've read in months, and it consumed me...exquisitely painful."
Posted by Unknown on "Metal Noose." by Aleas
- "I always try to refrain on commenting on pieces so personal b/c it seems no matter what is written here it doesn't change what is inside. The pain... The loss...even the hope. Through your voice I feel an utter anquish of your love slipping away."
Posted by Narcissa on "Metal Noose." by Aleas
- "Such a harsh lesson to learn, and consciously knowing that so more time has to elapse b4 shades and shapes become more than silhouettes in the street.. A state of mind that allows you to think/feel without reverting back into ones hiding place, where you're so far down that a lulled security is the only dimension you can find cold comfort ...all this said ifeel your slowly surfacing in a slow motion manner, which is a good thing mate, painful none the less im sure. "
Posted by Unknown on "Godsent Goodbye." by Aleas
- "Never saying goodbye means never letting go...but going on you must. We all do and we take that love and pain with us. We go on because we have to and in a way we take them with us. You got me in the last part of this...a deep and wounding piece...hopefully it will help you heal. "
Posted by Narcissa on "Godsent Goodbye." by Aleas
- "this is so beautiful and painful,-salvation.i would love to write something like this,to someone worth it.x"
Posted by estherbell on "Of You." by Aleas
- "I've always felt a connection with your words... you captured my sentiments exactly...but I have taken one thing w/me when I leave here..."
Posted by Narcissa on "Epiphanies Lost." by Aleas
- "That was an excellent piece of writing man, and with your last statement:I guess you can only sum up 'what is'...being that your "no better off" than when you "started all of this"...and 'I' can only imagine what it's been like,.. but have you thought what it may have been like without this?"
Posted by Unknown on "Epiphanies Lost." by Aleas
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