Comments by All Members
- "I like it :) it's short and to the point. I've noticed many people use their own style of writing, instead of following what every poet does. And I like the end xD funny xD"
Posted by Unknown on "Air of the Beast" by freudian-slip
- "this is great. I feel as if you have portryaed an American issue so well in this. People should grow up with there kids, live with them. Without that people have nothing."
Posted by Unknown on "11 years to Fatherhood" by freudian-slip
- "Manipulation that just feels like you're being so miraculously good when you give in... This is more or less how I got my first cat, funnily enough."
Posted by Unknown on "Mr. Fatty McFatty" by freudian-slip
- "I love short poems. This one was a slow build up, it felt like a storm approaching knowing that it'll kill you. Then the ending, pow. I'm reeling. Great write."
Posted by eidos on "Undeclared" by freudian-slip
- "...this is just vague enough (for me) that it allows me to envision several different scenarios, some probably far removed from your intent..."
Posted by FadedBlues on "Undeclared" by freudian-slip
- "Not many pains compare with those of withdrawals, " a bullet to the head
instantly refreshes your soul" I think sums it up brilliantly - XXOO"
Posted by Nehema on "4000 milligrams" by freudian-slip
- "Such a sensation I get from the lovely little piece. Great work. Really spot on here. A beautiful sense of love... "
Posted by Symbol on "Undeclared" by freudian-slip
- "Well expressed thoughts and sounds like he has moved on. There will be others...thanks for sharing this intimate piece."
Posted by dwells on "The Wreckage" by freudian-slip
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