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His train missed the stop to Giveashit
By freudian-slip
Unwittingly bound to your own last word
tied in ribbons of emasculated
pink and white
pity me
fuck you
self hatred
with thoughts on paper and page
not fit to stand among any human feeling
yet reeling in
all those
with whom your manipulation
captures
a familiar abusive pattern...
and yet even I
can not turn a blind eye to a beating
not quite deserved
self inflicted
absurd
poetic masturbation
served up buffet style
open viewing casket tribute
begging for public retribution
it seems the irony in your last exposed argument
created
in what you originally requested
but were unable to digest
given your abundantly full stomach of hate
the ability to recognize love
in it's most primitive state.
*for an old friend*
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© 2009 freudian-slip
Comments on "His train missed the stop to Giveashit"
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On Saturday, June 2, 2012, dalphon
(70)
wrote:
a familiar abusive pattern... poetic masturbation.. this is art at it's finest.. well done.
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On Tuesday, February 10, 2009, The Lipstick Factor
(290) wrote:
Wonderful flowing write--hard to do with the subject matter. Deserves more than a single read to be fully appreciated....I shall return to read again..
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A former member wrote:
I know this feeling....I am envious of how you express it. Very nicely stated....and by the by...I pity the muse that inspired this poem. For to inspire such a passionate flow they will probably never know, that which is truely missing in their life.
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