the social standards of beauty
By Saint Sentient
miss.
under the bridge I'll kiss you somber.
and bridge the gap between your shoulderblades.
touching your lips like whispers of
blade tipped romances. firecracker beauty
and we'll dance like we're young again.
your eyes sing goodbye. but we walk the miles
from your heart to mine.
and we're peerless.
priceless- in a sense. it's endless.
this love. and I'll smile
as I call you my strawberry princess
the sky screams hideousness. she's begging my decisions
to seep through my skin- bleed her of grace.
and make her as ugly as the charcoal
she paints her masterpieces on the walls with.
and you're beautiful. in no sense of the word.
the world is a daring place.
and I beg. the broken hearted bimbos and speak taboo
it's useless. as we linger on spent promises.
I never tell her she's beautiful. but I did.
and she never swears she's humbled. but she is
in retrospect.
we're both liars.
so kiss me. beautiful. and I'll break you.
this. I can promise.
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Comments on "the social standards of beauty"
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A former member wrote:
There
Are
Few
Poems
That
Make
Me
Feel
Emotion
And
I
Am
Pleased
To
Say
This
Is
One
Of
Them.
Beauty
Has
No
True
And
Normal
Form.
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On Sunday, January 15, 2012, MsDemise
(2) wrote:
OK....Im In Love with this poem. Seriously it really meant a lot to me Im not sure why but I feel it...
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On Tuesday, January 10, 2012, DarkAsh
(45) wrote:
Good poem, I like the way you chose your words.
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A former member wrote:
This is really amazing and quite beautiful.
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On Friday, February 6, 2009, Vicious Pixie
(58) wrote:
i'm wiped out by this. exquisite
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A former member wrote:
i keep picturing the broken people who are frameless in this world, under the bridge. . ..there is beauty, "i never tell her she's beautiful-- we're both liars" this piece feels so isolated and lonely, but such a raw voice you possess..
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On Saturday, July 14, 2007, sIo
(898) wrote:
this is softly piercing...painfully slow and comfortable.
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A former member wrote:
unique and inspiring. It flows perfectly and you totally have your own style - this is a wonderful poem. I am in awe. truly.
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A former member wrote:
this was very lovely, great write ~Tamara
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On Tuesday, December 12, 2006, beautifulfallenangel
(62) wrote:
' so kiss me beautiful, and i'll break you, this i can promise'.... honest and cruel but beautful...
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On Sunday, December 3, 2006, PoeticHellion
(191) wrote:
I think that this just put me in a stupor. *stunned*
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On Thursday, November 30, 2006, Mylissa
(825) wrote:
This was the most amazing write from start to finish.
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On Wednesday, November 29, 2006, carlosjackal
(2787) wrote:
Gorgeous. Simply gorgeous.
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On Wednesday, November 29, 2006, Alanarchy
(1168) wrote:
Masterful. Easy on the eyes and heavy on the mind. This was definately astounding.
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On Wednesday, November 29, 2006, Alanarchy
(1168) wrote:
I dig the title, as well.
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A former member wrote:
"as we linger on spent promises." And those last two lines...you've swept me away into a masterpiece, a place where the truth speaks through any words you could think to say because that's just how well you know better. Excellent imagery here. ~*Beth*~